Interesting start. I can only guess which clans everypony else would be in. Pinkie as a Malkavian is almost obvious, RD as a Brujah is easy to imagine as well. Maybe Rarity as a Toreador or Ventrue. So many possibilities. I'll be following this.
A few erors, missing words and such but otherwise awesome.
Cant wait to see more of this.
But this being an alternate universe (not just by tag obviously) we will need a better insight on everything i think. This is more Chapter 1 then a prologue since the focus wasnt really the background and setting things up.
Okay, I've read it. It's definitely not bad, so I'm looking forward to the next chapters. By the way, those pictures were the reason I bought the game a couple of months ago. Child of Toreador.
1522243 I had much of the same concept, except I was going to go new World. Only I'm REALLY bad at trying to find the words to start the story, and finding the words to help it flow smoothly.
1522177 I kinda ran with the assumption that the mane 6 would be on the same side, but I was not too far off on the guesses. The last time I played Vampire the Masquerade Gangrel was still apart of the Camarilla so I may be a little out of the loop as far as recent events in the game. I will have to look up Rhanite's work when I have time.
My bad, its Tzimisce and i honestly hope that nope Fluttershy wont be one, because they are abominations. Have a short one:
If you described a Tzimisce as inhuman and sadistic, it would probably commend you for your perspicacity on the inhumanity, and then demonstrate that your mortal definition of sadism was laughably inadequate.
If you described a Tzimisce as inhuman and sadistic, it would probably commend you for your perspicacity on the inhumanity, and then demonstrate that your mortal definition of sadism was laughably inadequate.
That could be a discription for all the Sabbat clans and most if not all the Camarilla clans to.
I hope Fluttershy is a Tzimisce because it was the clan I used to play when my goodie two shoe GM allowed it. The good thing about VM is that there are standards for the difrent clans, but it up to the player to choose if they want to act on it. I'm sure Fluttershy would be the most loveble and nice Tzimisce in the history of the clan.
And I have to admidt that I would love to see Angel as a Tzimisce Goul.
Finally I must admidt that I can't see Fluttershy as any Clan if we follow the clan traits one hundred procent.
good first chapter, gonna follow this, even though i normally stay away from crossovers.
alt universe: what is different? (if it's going to be revealed through the story then please say so) crossover: do need to have played vampire:the masquerade? i've talked to my friends about it slightly some time ago, but i still don't know which species of vampire is which...
1523358 Just because they can fleshcraft, doesn't mean that's all they can do. Tzimisce keep servants and slaves, for example.
1524012 Short descriptions of the clans -- Giovanni: in short, the Mafia with necromancers Tzimisce: Social Darwinists that can mold flesh like putty Toreador: Artists and innovators obsessed with beauty Malkavian: Lunatics with a penchant for divination Brujah: Violent anarchists Tremere: Blood magicians, originally mages from the Order of Hermes Ventrue: Politicians (*shudder*) Lasombra: Elitist keepers of the night, with power over the shadows Caitiff: Clanless
There are more; Assamite, Setite, Gangrel, Nosferatu, Ravnos, and plenty of bloodlines shooting off the main clans besides.
A ghoul is A living creature given a regular dose of vampire blood; he becomes addicted to the blood, which a vampire will often use to enslave the ghoul.
1524804 Well, everypony is still a unique individual of course. So for a story, it's more about the individual personalities than the broad strokes the clans are painted with.
1524778 Well you forgot to mention important facts in some but that sums it up pretty much yeah. You should just mention that the Giovanni are not as much a mafia as they are a family, literal one.
Still there is a lot to read about for anynone interested.
1530753 Don't worry. All the vamps in the VTM series act like real vampires - seduce humans (or in this case ponies) for blood, no sparkles in the sun crap, the sun kills them on contact.
1546198Hmm. I always though it was more of burst into flame but if you reach shadows in time you survive but badly burned thing. Guess it varies as much from author to author as it does type to type.
i have bee tying to write a cross over of these two for some time now if i do finsh may i post the name here/ i will message you with it . this looks good cant wait to read a twiligth a tremer just like me.
1546597 In VTM: Bloodlines, Jack mentions that if you catch a sunrise, it is all over for you. Terese uses the threat of a sunrise to coerce you into doing her bidding. The malkavian leader was staked and left for the rising sun, after which you find a pile of ash where he was. it can be assumed that the sun is fatal in this universe.
It just hit me how well Rainbow Dash fits for a Brujah:
Clan powers: Strength, Speed, Charisma
Clan weakness: short fuse
1547015 Sunlight causes serious burns, yes. But vampires are also sluggish during the day (the less "human" they are, the harder it is for them to wake up. So, if you have a shootout inside a building and a stream of light hits you through a bullet hole in the shutters, it will be like someone extinguishing a cigarette on your skin. But if you get thrown out of the window into the street, you will burn to death before you can make it to the shadow.
Also, I assume it is a crossover with VTM and not the whole old World of Darkness? Otherwise Photo Finish would be wrong - turning a true mage into a blood mage is a horrible waste of potential.
On the book’s cover, in place of a title, was a circle with a square in it, and a triangle on its top right side.
TREMERE!!!
“Twilight Sparkle, it has been a while since I created a childe of my own, let’s hope you are worth ze trouble,” the mare said under her breath, as she trotted down the street.
hmm who is this and why does she want the book and twilight maybe they dont need the book and its just a test for twilight?
“I, Photo Finish, have arrived!”
NOOO i dont like her why does she have to be twilights sire
“Welcome to ze Tremere Clan, Twilight Sparkle,”
I WAS RIGHT!!! as are most if not all malkavians (i like playing as a malkavian!) if you look into their words
this can lead somewhere but why did it get a thumb down?
Interesting start. I can only guess which clans everypony else would be in. Pinkie as a Malkavian is almost obvious, RD as a Brujah is easy to imagine as well. Maybe Rarity as a Toreador or Ventrue. So many possibilities. I'll be following this.
Ooh, I was thinking about this for awhile.
I'll have to keep an eye on this.
Just a guess, going by the cover image, character personalities, and stuff...
Applejack = Ventrue
Fluttershy = Gangrel (my 2nd favorite clan)
Rarity = Toreador
Pinkie Pie = Malkavian
Rainbow Dash = Brujah
Twilight Sparkle = Tremere (my favorite clan)
Now, time to start reading.
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If the author goes by the images made by Rhanite then:
Applejack = Giovani
Fluttershy = Tzmichi
Rarity = Toreador
Pinkie Pie = Malkavian
Rainbow Dash = Brujah
Twilight Sparkle = Tremere
Celestia= Ventrue
Luna= Lasombra
A few erors, missing words and such but otherwise awesome.
Cant wait to see more of this.
But this being an alternate universe (not just by tag obviously) we will need a better insight on everything i think. This is more Chapter 1 then a prologue since the focus wasnt really the background and setting things up.
Okay, I've read it. It's definitely not bad, so I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
By the way, those pictures were the reason I bought the game a couple of months ago.
Child of Toreador.
Dang. Too little, too late. Hope you do well with the story!
1522208What's 'too little, too late'? I'm going to need some context here
1522243 I had much of the same concept, except I was going to go new World. Only I'm REALLY bad at trying to find the words to start the story, and finding the words to help it flow smoothly.
And Spike is a Ghoul ^^
1522177
I kinda ran with the assumption that the mane 6 would be on the same side, but I was not too far off on the guesses. The last time I played Vampire the Masquerade Gangrel was still apart of the Camarilla so I may be a little out of the loop as far as recent events in the game.
I will have to look up Rhanite's work when I have time.
YES!
Finaly someone writes a fic to this amazing pic.
Can't wait for this story to evolve.
It was good, but towards the end your paragraphs got a bit... clunky, I think the word is. Might want to watch out for that.
Now excuse me, but I have to go read up on VtM now, on account of never having played it.
P.S. Go Tzmichi!
Im sorry...Requiem is better. At least from a pnp stand point.
this.
yes.
malkav gangrel and tremere are not hard to assign
the other three of the mane 6... i dunno.
THIS IS RELEVANT TO MY INTERESTS
An Old World of Darkness fic? My prayers are answered. Even better in that it's Vampire: the Masquerade.
1522310
In Rhanites pics they assigned who the artist thought would be "best", regardless of side.
1522321
My bad, its Tzimisce and i honestly hope that nope Fluttershy wont be one, because they are abominations. Have a short one:
If you described a Tzimisce as inhuman and sadistic, it would probably commend you for your perspicacity on the inhumanity, and then demonstrate that your mortal definition of sadism was laughably inadequate.
1522712
That could be a discription for all the Sabbat clans and most if not all the Camarilla clans to.
I hope Fluttershy is a Tzimisce because it was the clan I used to play when my goodie two shoe GM allowed it. The good thing about VM is that there are standards for the difrent clans, but it up to the player to choose if they want to act on it. I'm sure Fluttershy would be the most loveble and nice Tzimisce in the history of the clan.
And I have to admidt that I would love to see Angel as a Tzimisce Goul.
Finally I must admidt that I can't see Fluttershy as any Clan if we follow the clan traits one hundred procent.
ok its official now i woship 3 things:
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and last but not least you static.fimfiction.net/images/avatars/8667_64.jpg
the pinky on you cover gives me the willies
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It could be used for all but even among most of them Tzimisce are considered sadistic and "monsters" arent they?
Flutters would probably make Angel a part of herself or something.
good first chapter, gonna follow this, even though i normally stay away from crossovers.
alt universe: what is different? (if it's going to be revealed through the story then please say so)
crossover: do need to have played vampire:the masquerade? i've talked to my friends about it slightly some time ago, but i still don't know which species of vampire is which...
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It's always possible to be antitribu and be on a different side of the fence than the rest of your clan (although Tremere antitribu get hunted down like the dogs they are! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png )
Also -- according to the Camarilla -- every vampire is a member of the Camarilla, even the Sabbat vampires.
1522712
Social Darwinists who seek physical and spiritual perfection? What's wrong with that? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png
1523358
Just because they can fleshcraft, doesn't mean that's all they can do. Tzimisce keep servants and slaves, for example.
1524012
Short descriptions of the clans --
Giovanni: in short, the Mafia with necromancers
Tzimisce: Social Darwinists that can mold flesh like putty
Toreador: Artists and innovators obsessed with beauty
Malkavian: Lunatics with a penchant for divination
Brujah: Violent anarchists
Tremere: Blood magicians, originally mages from the Order of Hermes
Ventrue: Politicians (*shudder*)
Lasombra: Elitist keepers of the night, with power over the shadows
Caitiff: Clanless
There are more; Assamite, Setite, Gangrel, Nosferatu, Ravnos, and plenty of bloodlines shooting off the main clans besides.
A ghoul is A living creature given a regular dose of vampire blood; he becomes addicted to the blood, which a vampire will often use to enslave the ghoul.
1524778
thank you, that's very useful, will be a little hard keeping track of all that though.
1524804
Well, everypony is still a unique individual of course. So for a story, it's more about the individual personalities than the broad strokes the clans are painted with.
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1524778
Well you forgot to mention important facts in some but that sums it up pretty much yeah. You should just mention that the Giovanni are not as much a mafia as they are a family, literal one.
Still there is a lot to read about for anynone interested.
Here is a link listing the 13th "main" clans (from the computer game, where most probably had the intro with the White Wolf Universe):
http://whitewolf.wikia.com/wiki/Clan_%28VTM%29
1523358
I have a bigger problem with Applejack as a Giovani. (I hate those fucking Itais.)
1521818 If Pinkie became a malkavian, wouldn't that make her sane?
like and stalk/fav
I've never heard of this 'masarade' thing, but I like. Any story that doesn't have vampires who sparkle is okay in my books.
1530753 Don't worry. All the vamps in the VTM series act like real vampires - seduce humans (or in this case ponies) for blood, no sparkles in the sun crap, the sun kills them on contact.
Malkie pie for the win
1546198Hmm. I always though it was more of burst into flame but if you reach shadows in time you survive but badly burned thing. Guess it varies as much from author to author as it does type to type.
i have bee tying to write a cross over of these two for some time now if i do finsh may i post the name here/ i will message you with it . this looks good cant wait to read a twiligth a tremer just like me.
1546597 In VTM: Bloodlines, Jack mentions that if you catch a sunrise, it is all over for you. Terese uses the threat of a sunrise to coerce you into doing her bidding. The malkavian leader was staked and left for the rising sun, after which you find a pile of ash where he was. it can be assumed that the sun is fatal in this universe.
This is pretty good so far.
It just hit me how well Rainbow Dash fits for a Brujah:
Clan powers: Strength, Speed, Charisma
Clan weakness: short fuse
1547015 Sunlight causes serious burns, yes. But vampires are also sluggish during the day (the less "human" they are, the harder it is for them to wake up. So, if you have a shootout inside a building and a stream of light hits you through a bullet hole in the shutters, it will be like someone extinguishing a cigarette on your skin. But if you get thrown out of the window into the street, you will burn to death before you can make it to the shadow.
Also, I assume it is a crossover with VTM and not the whole old World of Darkness? Otherwise Photo Finish would be wrong - turning a true mage into a blood mage is a horrible waste of potential.
Tremere? Oh, Photo Finish, Malkavian is where it's at.
TREMERE!!!
hmm who is this and why does she want the book and twilight maybe they dont need the book and its just a test for twilight?
NOOO i dont like her why does she have to be twilights sire
I WAS RIGHT!!! as are most if not all malkavians (i like playing as a malkavian!) if you look into their words