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Pinkie Pie is friends with everpony in Ponyville, but what if just one day Pinkie did something so destructive, so horrifying, and so scarring her friends turn on her

She then discovers a lost "friend" that has been living right under her nose to set her straight, but is it so smart for Pinkie to go without friends for awhile?


Will things work out in the end for Pinkie or will her friendship(or mind) crumble around her?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 17 )

TO THAT COVER PIC:

Quick, Pinkie! Take some Radway!

She should take some Tums......

Dawww(( But what happened?

AND she`s not a vegetarian?

Im so very very confused.... not that its poorly written or anything Im just confused

Excellent, I'm drawn in.:pinkiecrazy:

1508838 Good that's what I was going for.

1508702 Well you can either fill in the story yourself(as in you decide what Pinkie did) or maybe there can be a way I can end this on a happy note...:ajsmug:

(Also about the vegetarian thing I was implying that she couldn't eat sweets or delicious desserts, but I guess it could be taken either way)

1509940 Some explnation would be nice. :eeyup:

There were many punctuation mistakes, but it was good otherwise.

1510039
"Twilight is going to do some freaky spell that'll curse me to be blue, or one that makes me a vegetarian."
"five pairs of hooves enter her room"
She's clearly chopped some of her friends' legs off to use in a recipe and is now suffering from bad heartburn caused by her cannibalistic culinary creation.

1511532

:pinkiegasp: Nope, but I like the way you think:twilightblush:

Basically the last part says that the fire has destroyed Pinkie on the inside, thus she slowly fades away but before her eyes close, her friends walk in to witness her demise. Her eyes were half shut so the last thing she saw of her friends were their lower halves.

1511766
Ah, I see, but their halves have half the hooves.

1509940 Oh! I thought she ate some meat muffins or something and now everybody hates her))))

What the actual f***?

Just a side note, if the story is done, you should probably mark it as "Complete" so people don't sit around waiting for updates and new chapters that will never come.

1597368

I'm still trying to think of how to end this story, it's just school, Borderlands 2, and writers block have set me back a bit. I'll finish it soon trust me.

Hm I think this could've been expanded as opposed to being finished with two relativly short chapters. :eeyup:

Well, that`s a good end!

You never truly gave us an answer to what she did to anger them.:applejackconfused:

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