Stray Ardor

by thewaffler

Semi sequel

Hi, I'm just writing to tell you guys that there is a semi-sequel/interquel to this fic up right now. It's called: Something More? and it's the story of Pony Joe moving to Ponyville and reconnecting with Twilight.

Comments

[Magical Trevor]

O.o DO WANT!

[aporath25]

Loved the "mood" music! Good to know the young fillies and gentlecolts in this story enjoyed the same kind of music us 90's children grew up with. The second one really was a blast from the past! We're All Dudes by LTJ & Kel Mitchell of Kenan and Kel! That was AWESOME! These interactive fanfics like these when music is included are AWESOME!

[thewaffler]

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There is a semi-sequel out right now called Something More. It takes place from the perspectives of Pony Joe and Twilight. Scoots and Spike are still featured in it as well as other characters from this and a some references to a fic my friend wrote called My Pink Salvation.

[Scorcher]

I loved this story from start to finish Please just go and take all my internets

[thewaffler]

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Actually it's used for dragons too.

[Wolf Counsler]

395961 ....right

[GiantMako]

Good lord! How is it that you've been commenting on my stories for this long and I had no idea that this little gem was written by you, a shadow of shame is to be cast upon me for my ignorance, and my lack of proper use of the search feature.

My ridiculousness aside, this was a great story waffler. A real feel good fic that I think does something that few of the stories I've read before were capable of accomplishing. We got to see Spike as more than a witty helper, or savior of the known world, in this story we get too see good ol Spike as a kid! It's awesome seeing Spike just having some innocent fun with friends his age, and the ending is well placed.

I liked how you showed off Spike's musical talent, and culinary mastery ( As you know I'm a firm believer in Spike's skills outside of just being an excellent assistant. ). The progression of his relationship with Scootaloo feels honest, and not rushed which is nice. And you having an amazing talent for describing scenes, and creating a appropriate mood.

Great story, and I apologize for not reading it sooner.

[thewaffler]

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Thanks, but I can't take all the credit, my buddy WinterTwister(Chris) typed it up, because he's better at dialogue and he's a faster typist. I also told him to improv when he was typing. The story as well as all the concepts, character interaction and scenes were all my idea. I wanted to tell a story that had little to do with any of the mane six at all, just preteen age kids just chilling out. I'm so happy to have grown up in the 90's. I'm glad a lot of people liked it and if you ever wanna do a collaboration or just chat feel free to to send me a line. I enjoy your fics as well.

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Peace Out.

*also I make gifs sometimes.

[GiantMako]

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Very nice Gif btw. Well a kudos to your friend on his typing skills, and a kudos to you for your concepts, and imagination. I appreciated the lengths you went too as far as showing preteens just having a good time without some end of the world plot waiting around the corner. A collaboration sometime would be really interesting to undertake, we'll have to give it a shot sometime.

And a line you shall receive, feel free to send one in my direction anytime you like.

[Your Antagonist]

That was marvelous, you should be proud of this fic! Thumbs up and a favorite. You actually elicited some physical reactions from me with this fic's adorability i.e. thumb chewing, toe twiddling, and so on. Hell yes!

[thewaffler]

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Depends on how you wanna see it, the thing is because so little is known about Spike's species/origins writers can make any assumptions about his aging process. I'm writing another sequel after Something More? set both 5 and 10 years after this story that should explain my take on all this, but be warned I don't write sad, or tragedy.