Celestia begins to reflect on how empty her life truly is and how it wasn't always that way. Can she escape her past, when she can live forever?
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Oh, well. Nice job. Chaos Breaker Approves.
... that was my brother... Grammar Nazi Approves.
Spacing and Paragraphs are needed, though thankfully not to the extreme I have seen for some other fics.
I'll be sure to go through and break it up a little more. Thank you for the feedback.
It "didn't always be"?
Try "hasn't always been"
Very touching! Earns
, an upvote, favoriting, and I shall be watching 
I have revised it taking into consideration all of the advise that y'all have given me.
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I couldn't find that error when I went through. If you could specify more exactly where that is, I'd be more than happy to correct it.
Thank all of you very much.
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Check your story's description
Such a shame... This started off as an excellent story. The TwiLuna hint was great and made me eager to keep reading and see where you were going to take this.
But FlutterMac and AppleDash is a double thumbs down for me and that was where I stooped.
I fail to see how two ponies who are quiet and never even talk to one another could become a couple, and butch shipping is just a no go...
2470674 I'm sorry you didn't like some of the pairs I made. I respect your opinion but am a little disappointed you let a few background details stop you nearly halfway through the story. They honestly were put in there to show the progression of time and to provide a foil to Celestia's current state of affairs as well as provide an outside-looking-in perspective of an immortal watching things change and dealing with past memories. Outside of that context, they serve little to no other effect on the story. I would urge you to finish reading just for the sake of doing so, it is short story, and pretend that the ships are of your preference if it bothers you so. Regardless, thank you for at least giving it a look and I hope you find some fictions that suit your preferences. After all, there's plenty of them out there.