1591135 if your gona rework you chapters id say rework the part where twilight and silver spoon has a talk it just seems far to convenient that she would carry around those stones for no other reason than "the plot says so".
Wait. DT loves Chilek? I totally missed that. I thought she loved Silver Spoon, not changeling. Actually I surprised she didn't refused considering she found new friends in CMC
Keep it up ^_^
1590679 Why not give me suggestions? Maybe given time I'll rework the chapters,right now I want to keep the story going without getting bogged down.
BUCK
YES!
UPDATE!
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There's an alternate universe tag, you can't say they are out of character!
i hope DT will be ok
1591135 if your gona rework you chapters id say rework the part where twilight and silver spoon has a talk it just seems far to convenient that she would carry around those stones for no other reason than "the plot says so".
once again another awesome chapter
*Posts a cooment asking for moar on last chapter*
*refreshes page*
*sees new chapter*
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1593068 lol you have the powerful of making people post
Wait. DT loves Chilek? I totally missed that. I thought she loved Silver Spoon, not changeling. Actually I surprised she didn't refused considering she found new friends in CMC
Hmmm, quality is starting to dip.