Yay! You updated! I wonder what's going to happen now?

Love it, continue on!

This chapter was a little slow. I liked it, trust me, I just thought it was a little slow. No offence meant. Keep updating, I can't wait to see what happens next.

1584578 You're right. Lol, this story either seems to be going too slow or too fast. I'm pleased that you still like it.

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I like everything...um....if that's okay with you...

She's cute when she whispers...*shakes head* Not a joke. It makes me laugh every time.

About time now......FEED ME MORE!!!

i hate wean anybody use blackmail, it's just down woger. But white mail i like

I love this story, it is 7:56 am and I am not sick anymore as said in a comment on another chapter, an the only problem I have with this story is that everypony knows that Sweetiebelle's talent is singing, that and that I have to wait for the next chapter. If my mom found out I was reading another mature fic she would kill me! She even hated me being on YouTube more than almost getting my dad fired from his job for playing Banned From Equestria (Daily) on his work computer That's how my parents are
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1584578 1584851 I disagree that chapter is being slow.
For example, forgiveness was too fast: CMC forgave DT instantly. Sweetie got cutie mark too fast too(in single paragraph).

In some places pacing can be felt as slow, but it's because of unnecessary repetition: for example in first part SS speech and later actions of DT were essentially the same.

In second part (SS+TWI and SS+Parents) Spoon tells her fears twice: once to Twilight, second time to parents.

Agreed on "Keep updating, I can't wait to see what happens next." though

So after this chapter I finally can't deny it any more. I don't like this story. To me the story is moving way too fast. No time is spent on the emotions of the characters like Diamond being blackmailed and betrayed by her best friend. A few characters feel OOC, like Twilight does in this chapter. The CMC forgive Diamond way too fast. This one is a nitpick, I don't think Sweetie Belle would get a Painting cutie mark... but that's just my opinion. Over all I feel that more detail on the characters emotions is the main thing I have against this but I see room for improvement.

What I do like about this story is the fact that Diamond loves Silver but Silver doesn't swing that way causing the rift. Diamond knows the changelings are dangerous but keeps it to fulfill her desire for Silver. I love the hay out of this concept but my earlier comments prevent me truly enjoying it.

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ok i love this story, it's brilliant! but seriously? Best pony will not get a painting cutie mark! I reject your cannon

Can't wait to see what Diamond chooses!
I love how DT is warming up to the CMC.
Poor Silver though.

It's all going a little fast but I still love this story thus far