"Twilight's eyes shot open and he came face to face with a sleeping Princess Luna. Craning his neck, he turned to look behind him, and saw Princess Luna was snuggled there, also asleep, a content look on her face."
I think one of the bolded was supposed to be Celestia.
Poor poor Spike! He had enough trouble getting away from seeing ... things ... The only way he will get away from it now is if he moves to a different country. heheh ... Twilight may have to move to Canterlot just to get away from Granny Smith and her shotgun!
Twilight nodded. “Even a weaker Unicorn can cause a spark of life if they are closely bonded with their mate... Take Lyra and Bon Bon for example.” “What about them?” Dash asked. “They have a foal.” Silence. “Scootaloo is their daughter,
1482899 If you read that, you should also have read that only nobility can join the Wonderbolts, of which, Rainbow Dash is not. Not yet at least, hehe.
Scootaloo is Lyra & Bon-Bon's daughter? That actually explains a lot. Awe at Twilight, most of the other fics with romance between those two, and how Scootaloo can go to school without anypony knowing where she lives.
Scootaloo is Lyra and Bon Bon's daughter? I never heard that one before. Poor Spike. He can't catch a break. Now if you will excuse me, I have an epilogue to read.
3934748 well actually that can happen if one or both of them have a pegasus in their familytree since the traits can skip multiple generations as can be seen with the Cakes as one foal is a unicorn and other one is a pegasus and that is possible cause atleast one of them have both in their familytree even if Mr. and Mrs. Cake are both earth ponies
Woo! Another chapter :)
(I may have kept refreshing the page)
1481392 lol im with you on that
Simply awesome.
Tiny little mistake at the beginning.
"Twilight's eyes shot open and he came face to face with a sleeping Princess Luna. Craning his neck, he turned to look behind him, and saw Princess Luna was snuggled there, also asleep, a content look on her face."
I think one of the bolded was supposed to be Celestia.
Epilogue please? Pretty please? Seriously, this is one of the best, if not the best, harem-style fics I've read so far!
Now I hope for an epilogue where everypony in the harem learns to know each other a little better. Chapter name: "Epilogue: The Elements"
I called out celestia. Go check past chapters
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Awsome
Amazing, loving this. Please continue this somehow.
(This is the first time ever I wanted to be spike)
1481365 Sweet Celestia, I wish I could do that... Have an outline for a 20 page paper due Tuesday, and I've just started on it...
2 princesses added to the harem
The end? MOAR.
No need to rush like this but I'd love to have more of this.
There is such a great opportunity for a sequel=)
Great chapter!
Please continue this story!
Poor poor Spike! He had enough trouble getting away from seeing ... things ... The only way he will get away from it now is if he moves to a different country.
heheh ... Twilight may have to move to Canterlot just to get away from Granny Smith and her shotgun!
Well that was an abrupt ending. I'd be interesting to see how everypony else would react to this... Sequel?
No don't end the story
Come on, do an epilogue with Twilight and his five wives watching over their children. Something like that, yes plese?
1481748 That would be awsome
Good Story, I hope for continuation of it in a new story
What will Cadance say?
She joked that she married Shiny to get Twily but ... was she completely joking or was there a little truth in what she said?
it can't end like this? must be a sequel!
more?
So...I found this on Fanfiction.net like 10 minutes, dood.
Then I find it here with all the chapters in place (Your FF story only has up to Loyalty or Laughter can't remember, ya know, dood.)
I like this so much, dood. Possibly the first time I enjoyed M/F in a good long time (Futa ruined that for me, dood)
Liked and Faved by your neighborhood Prinny, dood.
MAOR!!! NOW!!
1481509 I noticed another error. You tacked 'The End?' at the end.
...
Moar is required. :P
More!
Holy. fuck.
shit just got real.
Another error that I saw: Apparently, Rainbow Dash is reassuring herself that she can't get into the bolts even though spitty and sorin are parents.
1482899 If you read that, you should also have read that only nobility can join the Wonderbolts, of which, Rainbow Dash is not. Not yet at least, hehe.
Iwantmore. ;;
It's a trap! Joking. MORE DAMMIT!
intresting..... I like the thrown in there. we'll... i think i could be happy if this was the ending.... very great series. :)
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Scootaloo is Lyra & Bon-Bon's daughter? That actually explains a lot. Awe at Twilight, most of the other fics with romance between those two, and how Scootaloo can go to school without anypony knowing where she lives.
The End? Awww, ok. I guess. I wanted to see Spike finally join in. Oh well, at least he has a chance withthe foals.
Who am I kidding, I a, reading when I should be asleep, I clearly don't have the control to stop.
Scootaloo is Lyra and Bon Bon's daughter? I never heard that one before. Poor Spike. He can't catch a break. Now if you will excuse me, I have an epilogue to read.
Spike has the worst luck in the world, running into Twilight screwing a different pony 7 times XD.
The end? No not the end, we need MOAR!!!!!!!
I loved it all so much and I hope that the protection spall failed and Luna and Clastia are pregnant
As muchas I like your idea of Scootaloo's origin, it's simply not possible, Scootaloo is a pegasus, Lyra is a unicorn and BonBon is an Earth Pony.
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all i can say is pound and pumpkin cake.
3934748 well actually that can happen if one or both of them have a pegasus in their familytree since the traits can skip multiple generations as can be seen with the Cakes as one foal is a unicorn and other one is a pegasus and that is possible cause atleast one of them have both in their familytree even if Mr. and Mrs. Cake are both earth ponies
so that is one possibility
Lyra + Bon Bon = ?!?
*Spit-take*
Scootaloo!?!
Called it!