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We were what stood between peace, and chaos. We were supposed to win right? Like in the old story books where the good guys always won? I watched it all slip away from the side lines. I let them down and it crumbled like a building under its own weight.

Fate has given me one more chance, to do something I've never done...

Authors comments: Since I am too broke for a computer, I have to use a iPod so italics are a pain. There are going to be a few errors, I do apologize for those, but I am not a good writer. With that being said, enjoy!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 3 )

Honestly the first chapter are good got potential for a good fics, but after second chapter the story pace is a bit rush, And the way twilight warm up with valen are just too sudden, why would she offer valen to stay with her library, she barely know him!. but still i looking forward for your next chapter.

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I kind of felt that way, but I had so much writers block while writing it, so I do apologize for that. I'm not the best writer. I appreciate the comments, they really do help! Thanks all!:twilightsmile:

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