• Published 17th Oct 2012
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Attack of the Giant Monsters - Destroyer14



On a normal day, a portal opens, bringing a a giant creature into Ponyville. It's name is Godzilla

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Epilogue

The evening had come, but it was still pretty bright out. Ponyville laid in ruins, but it was over. In the center stood everyone, the monsters, the Mane 6, the Princesses and the Shobijin.

"Thank you, thanks to you Ponies and Princesses the balance has been restored. We shall take our leave now. Farewell!"

Mothra's eyes turned green. From them she shot a beam. It opened up a portal. The Shobijin started to fly in, followed by Mothra, Baragon, Rodan, and Anguirus. Godzilla looked down to see Fluttershy, whom was looking at him smiling. He nodded and preceded into the portal. It closed.

"Well that was quite possibly our coolest adventure yet." Rainbow Dash said.
"Discord is still out there." Twilight said.
"Yes, but let's not worry about him now. We have a lot of rebuilding to do." Princess Celestia said.
"I think a celebration is in order!" Pinkie Pie said.
"Right after we rebuild a bit Pinkie." Applejack said.
"Godzilla was such an amazing creature. He has a really tough exterior, but on the inside, he's really caring." Fluttershy said.
"I still can't get over that monster made of smog!" Rarity said.

Everyone laughed and preceded to get started on rebuilding Ponyville.

The End.

Comments ( 6 )

I feel kinda empty. It's a good story but I felt the ending was way too rushed and you don't really leave the door open for any continuation. I would've liked to know what happened to Discord. Also, why didn't you bring in more giant monsters like Battra, Manda, Varan, Gorosaurus, Megalon, Megaguirus or even King Ghidorah?

I'm not sure what to make of this. It was a interesting idea but the execution, especially the last part could have been better. You explained Fluttershy's kaiju telepathy (Discord did it!) but how did Discord even escape?
How did he know about the kaiju in the first place?
How did Discord capture the princesses?
Where is the real Zecora?
:trixieshiftright:

1604101 Discord just teleported himself away somewhere before he could be sucked into the portal. Well Megalon did appear back in the first act. Yeah, I had to pick and choose which ones to use. I didn't want to use too many. I couldn't find a way to squeeze in King Ghidorah. 1604439 Yeah there were quite a few things that were left unexplained. I don't consider this to be that great of a story, I don't excel in story telling like many on here.

1607588 Thank you Comrade Fluttershy. :twilightsmile:

Crazy and fun story! :rainbowlaugh:

Well this was nice while it lasted:pinkiehappy:

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