Rainbow Dash Pinkie promised she'd help Pinkie Pie at Sugarcube corner if she ever needed it. However she'd didn't realize she'd be roped into baking, which is what happens when Pinkie comes to call.
Something short and silly that popped into my head.
Not my first fiction or fan fiction piece, but it is my first FiM fanfiction. Any resemblance to any other fics is purely coincidental, I haven't bothered to check if anyone else has written any fic like this.
Also, lame title is lame, I'm sorry.
Chapters (1)
I was expecting something way different I mean wayyyyyyyy different lol
Me: Oh please no, PLEASSEEEE NOO.
Oh. (Phew) I'll give it a read then.
Just finished reading.
In character, cute, funny, and above all, perfectly adorablely innocent. Well done :)
Simply delightful to read. Fun, light-hearted comedy.
Keep it up
Lols! A good one shot that flowed well and was well written. Though I kinda feel sorry for pinkie at the end
Cute fic, few small typos: “I dunno Pinks, I’m not really a, baker.” - you don't need a comma here
shark - do you mean shrank?
unless is had - unless it had
and but her lip nervously - bit her lip
in the hair in excitement, - in the air
flattening it to much as she did - too much
out of the question - was out of the question
Bits of batter and dough was splattered on the counter were splattered
Rainbow Dash was ct off as Pinkie screeched - cut off
Very cute and fun. I enjoyed it immensely.
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Ohh, thanks for pointing those out.
Fixed'em up.
The concept is interesting, must read.... *Dies of Laughter*
Sweet and nice to read.
I like your style.
Its a short funny story and very in character.
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