Never thought Flutterhy and Spike would go at it
goos story

*good*

Oh why can't this happen to me!!!!!!!
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A little fast paced but still earns a

Huh....felt a bit rushed with their romance from them jumping from really good friends to sex, but you done a good job on this, I'm impressed.

Not a bad story I gotta admit

I realize that giving constructive criticism on a story this old might be moot, but...

“Of course, how could I have forgotten that dragons have triple the reproductive organ growth rate as stallions do?” she thought to herself, remembering some of her study of dragon anatomy.

Since Fluttershy was thinking instead of speaking, you should consider removing the quotes, and italicizing her thoughts, like so:

Of course, how could I have forgotten that dragons have triple the reproductive organ growth rate as stallions do? she thought to herself, remembering some of her study of dragon anatomy.

Likewise for

“Do all mares taste like this?” he wondered silently to himself.

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Huh your name reminds me of something