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But Please, Don't Bite

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Octavias Melody

Octavias Melody #1 · 2 weeks ago · 1 · 1 ·

I applaud your stance to create better fanfiction.

LyraFangirl

LyraFangirl #2 · 2 weeks ago · 1 · 1 ·

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I prefer to say my stance here is 'create fanfiction that caters to my tastes' rather than 'better'. I know I'm really picky with the stuff I read, but that doesn't mean I'm more capable or talented than anyone when writing my own stuff. Just providing to others what I personally would like to see more of

Thanks for the support :)

milzyywilzyy

milzyywilzyy #3 · 2 weeks ago · 1 · 1 ·

This is the sort of content I really wish there was more of! A really great job, especially on writing their personalities, and absolutely to my liking as well! 💙💙💙

LyraFangirl

LyraFangirl #4 · 2 weeks ago · 1 · 1 ·

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Thank you! Glad my vision was of your liking :) I did my best to get the characters and their dynamic as close as how they were in the movie. Hope you like the next chapters as well

flamedra

flamedra #5 · 1 week ago · 1 · ·

More please

MrHeliuminium

MrHeliuminium #6 · 1 week ago · 1 · ·

Honestly, this is one great story. I also like to see the characters interact before going down to buissness. Abd the Hitch X Sprout dynamic is one I think can go a long way.
Cant wait for the next chaper!

LyraFangirl

LyraFangirl #7 · 1 week ago · · ·

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Thanks for reading! I didn't really intend for the build up to be this long, but the dynamic of these two is so complex it just ended up happening lol but I guarantee it's all important for the smexy stuff coming soon

MrHeliuminium