Dear Twilight, my most faithful student. DO NOT READ THIS LETTER.
For the betterment of everypony you love and care about do not read or take anything in this letter seriously.
To: Twilight Sparkle
From: Twilight Sparkle
This story is interactive, in order to read everything and get both sides of the story you need to turn on or turn off dark mode on the site its self, also be warned secret text is really small so sorry you need to work for your sweet sweet LORE.
Or you could be a complete jerk and just highlight it with your curser and ruin all the work I did.
WARNING: The interactive part of this story may not work if you are reading on mobile sorry.
First read with dark mode on then after you are done reading, turn off dark mode and read it again.
(This was made for the dialogue only contest.)
I like my act in this, but really I am way more than my creator makes me out to be.
Hope your happy, has to blind my eyes just to read the secret text.
Great story.
And I really hope everything turns out well in the end.
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I have resubmit it
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I plan to make a sequel shhhh
11897646
My keyboard is sealed. 🤐 😉
Very awesome idea, the interactive element works even better now!
That was a very good story, ngl i wanna see a sequal to this like another interactive like would you follow your own words? Or would you go blind eye to the letter and following the entitied path and repeat the cycle. Ngl i wanna see or read what will happen
Great story
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If i make a sequel it would have some secret text but it probubly wont be the intire gimmick of the story like it was in this. in the next one you could probubly just fine some secret messages.
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is the secret text too small or is it all able to be read ok?
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thanks could not have done it with out you
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I was able to read it perfectly fine on light mode, only had to zoom in a little.
I used to have a computer but not anymore so I wouldn't be able to 100% tell you.
Though I am curious if anyone else is having problems.
..... Holy MOLY THOSE LINES HIT HARD, MAN! I was literally getting chills! Ah man, that was a REALLY awesome read! I hope to see more of this and possibly a sequel!
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wink wink
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I am a big fan of yours so if you could could you check out my other stories and tell me what I can do to improve.
You should read my story BRIGHTBURN: TAKE EQUESTRIA
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Nah its perfect. I just suck at wording it properly hold on let me correct it
Some of the grammar errors were a bit distracting, but overall great work.
I really liked the light mode/dark mode feature you used.
However, I can never forgive you for making me turn on light mode. It's so different and weird.
I use night mode 24/7, except on mobile.
Nice to see there's a sequel in the works.
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Like I said I am sin with no rhyme or reason.
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You don't scare me. Who's afraid of a pathetic fallen angel that got high off his own pride? You spend thousands of years building your plan, you kill everyone in the world, only for your entire scheme to become undone with a single letter. Call yourself whatever you like. You are still nothing. You scream and writhe and gnash your teeth in the presence of the Alpha and the Omega. Those who follow I AM cannot be harmed by you, for HE comes quickly, and exhalts the humble. It is you who shall be humbled by the Light of the World, which you will never comprehend. Get behind me, Satan, for you may brush HIM on the heel, but HE shall bruise you on the head. Amen.
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Great. Twilight will defeat this arrogant pompous villain easily.
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damn
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got em