Demons were once merely a myth. But now, they are all too real.
Scribe Twilight Sparkle is content with her position within The Order, simply documenting and cataloging various menial pieces of information. It's a life she couldn't imagine being any different.
However, when a veteran Demon Hunter arrives at Monastery Firelight, and she's at the wrong place at the wrong time, she's thrust into a new, terrifying and dangerous world. One that has always existed beneath the veil of her previous life.
Now, instead of shying away from the darkness, she must face it head-on.
Chapters (5)
This story's freaking awesome.
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We will definitely be reaching this point eventually.
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Prep your BFGs, boys.
Third person present perspective? Really... Really?
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Are you aware that a vast majority of stories are third person
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What’s wrong with third person? As a literary device it can help authors get information across that first or second person perspectives aren’t necessarily able to.
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You complain about it, yet your library "They struck a cord" has stories written in the same style...
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Third person present. Did y'all just blank that last, vital word out of existence while attempting to hit back at me? Cause if so, y'all got bigger problems than me.
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Like I stated to the other two before seeing this one. Third Person Present. That last word is vitally important to understand the message I'm imparting. Third person perspective is perfectly fine, and in fiction often times vitally necessary. However, The PPF tense is just as, if not more, important for story flow.
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Gotta be honest I did not see present. Guess I just skimmed over that.
Either way, what exactly is the problem with present tense? I personally find it stranger when the wording makes it sound like something already happened instead of in the process of happening.
Why would I want to put something like
"Twilight walked to the door"
instead of
"Twilight walks to the door."
Do you mean first hoof here or is it intentional?
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Meant hoof. Good catch.