When Isabel's hiking trip turns into a fight for survival in an unknown land, at first everyone is excited. But as hours turn to days, it becomes a desperate struggle for survival.
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I wonder if they'll try eating grass.
I liked this. You clearly put a lot of effort into thinking out the implications of suddenly becoming a different species, and how their previous skills as humans would interact with their new biology. I can't critique the finer points of your writing, but to the untrained eye like mine it seems pretty stylish. I don't know if this is your first story; if it is, it is exceptionally good work, but consider this a thumb's up from another beginner here on FIMfiction.
"Huddled together, furtive and vulnerable. Rats in a maze."
"The requirements of survival cannot be met on an empty stomach." Yet what if the food is incapable? The pegasi can probably eat fish as the oils and fats in them are needed for the extra calories burned from flying, but what about the others? Im going to guess that it will take time for others to find them, and by that point, they will have learned the skills needed for survival and have a camp set up to protect from the rain. But the true question will be what of their mind and their spirit. Will they become stalwart and vigorous within this hell that they have found them selfs in? Or will their mind fail them, becoming hopeless and fearful?
Pretty good so far, keep up the good work.
Hu wa that got a dark way too fast noooooo come one come back across the Styx boatman be damned why you must die now of all times. Morale will be shot dead and they will lose their hunger now.
RIP Phoebe.
Hunger, cold, and damp are a dangerous combination. Just add illness to complete the cocktail of lethality, and that usually comes soon enough.
Can we make a Telltale Heart. Friends are supposed to be able to live to tell their tale not die meaninglessly in this sprawling tomb.
Oh, the heart of the Everfree, huh? I'm having trouble working out what will kill them quicker; the environment or the wildlife.
Hopefully the group can be found before there is no one left to be rescued.
I wonder if Isabel is going to be the one to make it out.
RIP Oscar.
I do hoe that Isabel will be able to make it out alive.
Way to keep us hanging on a knife's edge with that ending.
Isabel is going to be devastated to learn that all of her friends are gone and she is the only survivor.