Storm Clash stood before the altar, his chest swelling with pride. The day of his and the others initiates’ introduction into the Order was nigh, and they had just gone through almost the whole ceremony. Now all that was left was to be illuminated by the glorious radiance of the Holy Light, in a blessing and benediction.
The Light shone down on the four ponies. Storm could almost feel its love filling him, and it was as pure as sir Matthias described, and-
-and it began to burn him alive.
“The Light deems you unworthy.” he heard Sir Matthias voice speak to him coldly as he toppled down in agony, his fellow initiates observing him without sympathy. “Begone.”
“Well, that’s something new!” a new voice, both amused and kind, shot through the air, deafening everything
Even, as Storm realised after few heartbeats, the pain.
He rose, blinking. He was still within the Lightbringer’s Chapel, but there was nopony here now. Sir Matthias, Guard, Serenity, Tucker, the crowd sitting on the benches as they bore witness to the ceremony... they were all gone.
Recalling the voice he hear, he looked around... and saw Princess Luna approach him.
“Your Majesty!” he exclaimed, and stumbled, not sure if he should bow or stand in attention, as he wasn’t wearing his armor.
“Please, Initiate Storm Clash, stay comfortable.” Princess Luna said calmingly, waving her hoof. Storm did as she bade him. As he nervously watched her approach him, he spotted that her lips curved into smirk. “I hope you don’t mind my amusement; it was the first time that I saw a pony have nightmare about light instead of darkness.”
“Wait, this is a dream?!” Storm exclaimed, and then remembered who he was talking to. “Um, Your Majesty?”
“Was this not a big giveaway?” the alicorn asked, lifting his chin gently.
Storm looked at her, confused (and a little bit afraid), until he noticed that something was off with his jaw. Or rather, than it wasn’t. As Princess Luna took her hoof, he brought his to examine his face, and realized that his jaw was straight!
“In dreams, we often see ourselves... undamaged.” the Princess explained as he continued to feel his face. “Although, that sometimes depends on what one sees as damage. But that’s not the reason why I came here. Judging by your nightmare, I assume that you fear the tomorrow’s ceremony?”
Storm gulped and backed a step away nervously. “Yes, Princess.” he confessed, looking down in shame, with his ears flat. “It has been a little more than a week since we’ve all started our training. I’ve learned about the Light as much as I could from books, memorised most of the prayers, and I know sir Matthias said we are ready, but... I don’t feel ready.”
His shame deepened as he realized that he had just blurted out all his fears to the Princess, whom he was sworn to protect, like a little colt to his mother. As Storm sat down, expecting Her Highness to address this matter, it suddenly hit him, that it was really strange. Normally, he kept all such thoughts to himself, and yet...
The pegasus looked up, puzzled, and the Princess smiled. “You are sharp, Initiate. Yes, I affected you through this dream to be more open. I sometimes do it, to better help my subjects with facing their fears.”
“I see...” Storm trailed off, a small part of him wondering if he should feel concerned about this, but quickly stopped. This was Princess Luna, the Princess of the Night - she could have done much more that just ‘affect’ him if she wished to.
“I will confess, I am, too, a bit surprised at Sir Matthias’ decision.” Luna said, returning to his problem. “Both me and my sister felt that your training should have lasted longer. However, even though I don’t understand the reason behind his... rushness, I trust Matthias completely. If he deems you four to be ready, then you are.”
“But...” the pegasus tried to protest, but stopped himself when he realized that by doing so he would imply that the Princess was wrong.
Princess Luna smiled, as if knowing exactly was going through his head. “If you still have doubts about whenever you are ready or not, talk to Matthias. You might fear his response, but knowing is always better than wondering.”
As she spoke, her voice wavered. In fact, everything around Storm Clash seemed to wave, including his mind...
Once Storm Clash had awakened from his sleep, it was still early in the morning. He looked at the alarm clock, wondering how long ago it was when Princess Luna visited him in his dream.
Of course, he remembered what she told him at the end. That if had doubts about being ready; he should talk about them with Sir Matthias. It would be a simple thing... and yet, the implications of it made him question Her Highness’ wisdom.
“What if Sir Matthias, hearing that I might be not ready, will postpone the ceremony? Or simply exclude me from it?” he thought as he landed back on his bed, covering his face with hooves.
He continued to lie like this, plagued by his doubts, for some time. He felt as if his fears began to choke him.
“I guess I will have to ignore your advice, Princess.” he finally thought, regret and shame filling him. “I know that you said it’s better to know than wonder, but-”
He stopped in mid-thought, his eyes wide. That was exactly what he has been doing all this time lying in his bed! He didn’t know for sure what Sir Matthias would say to him. Who he was, to assume what the Grand Master of the Order would say? Especially when the Princess said that she trusts him.
Even though he understood that, it still didn’t make the prospect of going to Sir Matthias easier. But it made it possible for him. So, albeit reluctantly, he rose and went to the bathroom, figuring that since he was going to speak with the Grand Master he should make himself more presentable.
Twenty minutes later, Storm was taking deep breaths as he stood before the doors to Grand Master’s office. There was a part of him that hoped that he was still asleep in his room, which would delay this conversation for an hour or so. But that would mean his mental torture would last longer...
Before his courage would leave him again, Storm knocked on the door, holding his breath.
He waited, the moment stretching out due to his fears.
“Looks like he’s still sleeping...” he thought with relief.
“Come in.” came a reply.
“Light damn it!”
Knowing that now there was no turning back, the pegasus pressed the door handle, entering Sir Matthias’ office.
“Permission to enter, sir.” he asked from the doorway.
Sir Matthias was sitting behind a desk on a swivel chair. He looked at him surprised, his hoof holding some note that he quickly put into a drawer.
“Storm Clash?” he asked, puzzled. “What are you doing up so early? I’ve given you all free morning, so that you could rest before the ceremony.”
“It’s... actually part of the reason why I am up.” Storm confesses. “Can I come in, sir?”
“Sure, son.” Sir Matthias replied, summoning him with a way of hoof. Storm, who was ready to enter, paused upon hearing ‘son’ and looked at his with raised eyebrow. Matthias grinned. “Stop calling me ‘sir’ over and over, and I won’t call you ‘son’.”
“Aren’t we roughly the same age?” the pegasus asked trotting over to his desk.
“More or less.” the Grand Master replied, and for some reason he appeared to be amused by what he said. “But let’s move on. What is it that brought you here?”
“Well, I...” Storm paused, unsure how to tell his superior officer that he wasn’t sure if he was ready to become a paladin. “I’m... not sure...”
“You’re nervous about the ceremony, aren’t you?” Sir Matthias hinted gently.
“Yes... and no.” he said, looking down. “I... I don’t think I’m ready, or, to be honest, if I deserve this honor at all.”
“I see...” Sir Matthias spoke thoughtfully. “And why do you think so?”
“Well, I...” Storm Clash began then paused, glancing at the earth pony. He was resting his chin on his hooves as he looked at him, his expression unreadable. “The Light... it’s just so...” he paused again, looking for the right word to describe the feeling he had when the Holy Light touched him during one of the praying sessions. “So good,” he finally said awkwardly, “and I’m-”
“Lad, listen.” sir Matthias interrupted him. “Nopony feels ready.” Storm’s eyes widened hearing that. “Nopony feels he deserves it. And you know why? Because nopony does. Like you said, it’s good. It’s grace, pure and simple. We are inherently unworthy, simply because we’re ponies, and all pony beings—aye, and... griffons, and minotaurs, and all the other beings—are flawed.”
Storm listened to his words, letting them sunk in. It... never occurred to him that... well, sure, he thought himself to be unworthy, but... to think that everypony...
“Even the Princesses?” he asked, confused.
“The Princesses would be first to tell you that they are, most importantly, ponies.” sir Matthias said, raising from his chair and walking around his desk. “I will admit, they are the being most close to perfection than anypony I ever met, but they, too, have their flaws.”
Storm opened his jaw to protest, but Sir Matthias silenced him with a raised hoof.
“I am not badmouthing them by saying it. I, too, have flaws, and they are far worse than the Princesses have. Everypony has them. But,” he raised his voice and smiled, “the Light loves us anyway. It loves us for what we sometimes can rise to in rare moments. It loves us for what we can do to help others. And it loves us because we can help it share its message by striving daily to be worthy; even though we understand that we can’t ever truly become so.”
Storm Clash wasn’t sure why, but... somehow, what Sir Matthias just said, made sense. He felt the Light’s love - a pure love, given for no reason, like a mother loving her foal - so he had this concept earlier, but it didn’t occur to him earlier to be this... simple.
Some of those thoughts must have reflected on his face, for the earth pony smiled approvingly and clapped a hoof on Storm’s shoulder. “So stand there today, among your fellow initiates. Stand there as I once did, feeling that you can’t possibly deserve it or ever be worthy, and know that you’re in the same place every single paladin has ever stood.”
“Yes, sir, I will.” the pegasus responded.
He was still nervous, and still felt unworthy, but Matthias’ words comforted him. After all, he was unworthy to begin with, and he still would be even if his training would last for a year.
“I know you will.” Sir Matthias replied, returning to his chair. “I’m glad that you came to talk to me about your fears; it must have taken a lot of courage.”
“Well... I wouldn’t say ‘courage’-”
“I would.” the earth pony interrupted him with a voice that did not allow any objections.
“And I can’t say that I decided this on my own.” Storm confessed. “Princess Luna came to me in a dream, and-”
“Aah, I see. Well, I’m sure Her Highness will be glad to see you have more confidence today.”
“Ye- wait, what?” Storm exclaimed.
“Oh, didn’t I mention it to you when I first mentioned to you that you’re ready two days ago, or when I was instructing you all how the ceremony will go?” Sir Matthias asked, and the pegasus couldn’t tell if he was being sincere or joking. “The Princesses will be here today, to witness the initiation of the first paladins. Aside from Princess Celestia and Princess Luna, present will be also Princess Cadance and Prince Shining Armor from Crystal Empire. There will be also few nobles, few citizens of Ponyville...” he paused, probably noticing that Storm was on a brink of having a panic attack. “Storm, the Princesses will be here only to bear witness to what will happen; they won’t be asking any of you to do anything. They will probably congratulate you afterwards, though. The horror!”
“I’m glad you find this so amusing, sir.”
“Don’t give me reasons to be so, then.”
“You seem to be perfectly capable of finding those reasons yourself, sir.” Storm hesitated, realizing that he was arguing with his superior officer, but Sir Matthias smiled at him encouragingly. “Like that time few days ago, when you’ve sent us to work on the field when you knew a storm was planned.”
“And how do you figure I know about it?”
“Well, sir, to put it plainly, because you sleep with the mare in charge of the weather around Ponyville.”
“And my attempt to help you build more confidence comes back to bite me.” Sir Matthias said, rolling his eyes. “On the side note, that mare is still sleeping behind those doors, so you might tone it down.”
Storm gasped quietly as he looked at the door Sir Matthias was pointing at. They were closed shut, thankfully. The pegasus sighed with relief. He preferred the earlier conversation to remain just between him and Sir Matthias.
“Don’t worry, the walls around my room are soundproof.” he heard Sir Matthias say as he took a look around the office quickly. It was surprisingly small; aside from the desk and the chair, there was only a small cabinet, a globe, and a trash basket. And there was a spiderweb in the corner.
“There’s a spider there, sir.”
“Yes, that’s my pet spider Anub’arak.” Sir Matthias said offhoofedly. “Anyway, since you are awake, you can join Serenity and go to the station. Princess Cadance and Prince Shining Armor will be arriving soon.”
“Soon? I mean, the ceremony is scheduled for noon, sir.”
“Yes, but they wanted to catch up with Lady Twilight. I’m sending Serenity - and now you as well - to officially welcome them on behalf of the Order. I would go as well, but I am a bit too busy.”
Storm nodded. While he didn’t fancy representing the Order like that, at least he wasn’t going to do it alone. And Princess Cadance had always seemed easier to approach than the Royal Sisters; probably because she was a lot younger. Plus, Shining Armor was still the Captain of the Royal Guard, and even though he exchanged words with him only few times, he was friendly to his subordinates. Outside of drills.
“You will find Serenity at the mess hall.” Sir Matthias said dismissively.
The pegasus saluted, and was just about to leave, when he paused. Was it just him, or was there a smirk on the paladin’s face for a moment? As if he was hiding something...
After a second, Storm shook of such ridiculous thoughts, and left the office.
“I’m sorry, little one.” Luna pleaded with her daughter to stop staring at her with an offended look. “But your auntie and I will need to talk about several important matters at breakfast, so you have to stay here.”
Normally, after Luna had lowered the moon, they would all eat at breakfast - or in her case, supper - and any other kind of meal together. However, both she and Celestia had quickly found out that neither of them could focus on anything else besides how cute Moonlight was. As such, when they knew they would have to discuss matters of state over the table, Luna would leave her precious little daughter behind, in a tender care of her most trusted maids.
Although, this time, Luna would have almost preferred to have Moonlight with her. She was fairly certain she knew what her sister wanted to talk about, and while the subject of today’s ceremony in the Everfree Abbey was one she was looking forward to - especially after she had helped Initiate Storm Clash with his nightmare - such couldn’t be said about the other one.
“Don’t be mad at me, Moonlight.” she asked once again, taking her daughter from her cradle with her magic and placing her in her forelegs. “I will be back soon, and we will have a little nap together. And maybe-”
“Oh, for the love of... Princess, you will spoil her rotten!”
Luna glanced at one of the few ponies that were allowed to speak so without any repercussion... to some point, at least. Angelic Heart, a middle-aged mare, looked a lot like her daughter Angelic Touch, the current Royal Physician. Like her, she had coat blue as the sky and a white mane. They would have been hard to tell apart, despite the age difference, if it wasn’t for her cutie mark (a smiling flower, bathing in the rays of sun), and that unlike her unicorn daughter, she was a pegasus.
The other mare present, however, was a unicorn. Caring Star was a lot younger than Angelic Heart, had a light gray coat and dark mane. Her cutie mark was a five-pointed star, also with smiling face in the middle of it.
“What Angelic Heart is trying to say is that you should be a bit more assertive with Princess Moonlight.” she said more gently than her college.
“‘A bit’?” the pegasus asked with a raised eyebrow, then sighed and returned to look at Luna. “Your Majesty, everypony is aware of yours and Princess Moonlight’s history, and that you spoil her so much is more than understandable in light of it, but-”
“- I cannot be such a putty in her hooves every time she frowns?” Luna finished, recalling fondly what she heard Doctor Horn tell her father once... or twice. Seriously, he and Angelic Heart would... probably murder each other in a day or so, they were that similar. “I am aware of that, but I cannot help it; she’s so cute!”
“That she is, Princess.” Caring Star agreed joyfully, while Angelic facehoofed. The unicorn then trotted closer and took the small unicorn from her forelegs. “Now, of you go. If you want to catch some sleep before you and Princess Celestia leave for Ponyville later, that is.”
Moonlight twisted her tiny head to regard the maid, as if she understood what she had said.
“Oh, don’t worry, little one.” Luna quickly said, taking a step towards her. “Mommy will-”
“Continue to annoy her servants?!” Angelic Heart interrupted her loudly enough to snap her out of her ‘motherly mode’. As Luna shook her head, the pegasus cleared her throat and continued in a more professional manner. “Since we are on the subject of your trip to Ponyville; do you wish us to prepare your royal attire?”
“No, both my sister and I shall go as we appear every day.” Luna replied, telling her what she and Celestia had both agreed on. “While it is going to be one of the most important events in the history of Equestria, we will be there only as witnesses. The ‘show’ will belong to Sir Matthias.”
A quickly masked wistful sigh escaped Caring Star at the mention of stallion’s name, causing Luna to chuckle at Arthas’ expense.
“Send a messenger to me if something happens.” she told them as she prepared to leave, causing Angelic Heart to stop looking at the younger mare with annoyance. “And during my trip to Ponyville, I will instruct the night guard to leave their fastest member outside the doors, so-”
“You know, Princess,” Caring Star interrupted her, grinning, “I hope I’ll remain in your service long enough to see your reaction when Moonlight will ask if she can sleepover at her friend’s house.”
“Bah!” Angelic Heart snorted before Luna could reply. “I hope I’ll live long enough to see her have a separate room!”
“Both hopes could be crushed very easily...” Luna replied, and although she let her voice sound threateningly, the two maids knew she was just jesting.
She had grown to like and trust them since her return, to the point of freely exchanging jokes like those. The two of them were among her most trusted servants; if they weren’t, she wouldn’t have let them take care of Moonlight - which was an honor craved by practically every female (and few male) member of the castle’s staff, including even one of the most devoted of Celestia’s own maids, Pixie.
“Alright you two; take care of my little Moonlight.” she instructed them as she left through the doors. She waved at her daughter. “Be right back, little one. Bye!” the small alicorn waved back. “Mummy loves you! Bye-”
She stopped once the doors were closed right in front of her nose. Sighing, Luna turned around before she could change her mind, and headed towards her and Celestia’s dining room.
As she contemplated how at the beginning Moonlight would cry every time she would leave her side, two night guards silently appeared, escorting her. Lune glanced at them, looking fondly at their enchanted looks that so reminded her of Shadow Bolt, her Champion of the Night. When she first saw them after her return, she nearly broke down into tears. But now she knew that those were only enchantments, and Luna no longer grew sad. Her Shadow Bolt was one of a kind.
“Despite even recent developments...” she mused.
“Good morning, little sister.” Celestia had greeted her as she sat down at the table next to her. “How was the night?”
“Uneventful, unless you count the nightmare from one of Sir Matthias’ initiates.” Luna replied, deciding it would be best to try and steer the conversation onto this tracks.
“Nothing too serious, I hope?” her sister asked, and took a pause to take a bite of a salad. “Today is an important day, after all.”
“I believe he will be fine.” she said, pouring milk on her cereal.
“Speaking off; do you know why sir Matthias decided the ceremony to take place so soon?”
“I have honestly no idea, sister. My best guess would be that they’re really ready, and that he feels that it should happen. I wouldn’t be surprised if he, too, is confused.”
“The Light works in mysterious ways.” Celestia summed up, following her thought perfectly.
They sit and eat in silence, broken only by occasional clang of spoons or forks against the plates.
“How’s your project coming along?”
“There it is.” Luna thought in annoyance.
“I believe I told you that if anything bad would happen, I would inform you immediately.” she told her, leaving an edge at the end of her voice.
“Yes, I remember, just-” Celestia replied, clearly not taking the hint.
“Leave us.” Luna ordered the servants and the guards, interrupting her sister.
Her night guards and few others listened at once, the others first glanced at Celestia before they would move.
“Once, such things would have infuriated me.” Luna mused as she waited for them to be alone.
“Tia,” she started once the door closed after the last pony, “you cannot treat me like a little filly.”
“I know-”
“A! I talk now, wait for your turn.” she scolded her. “Tia, you said it yourself: ‘we were meant to rule together’. But how can this be true, if you constantly try to control me?”
“I’m not-”
“Observe, then. Monitor, double check my decisions... should I go on?”
“No, you don’t have to.” Celestia replied, sad. “Luna, I just... I worry that I might fail you again, and-”
“I know, sister.” Luna told her, rising from her seat and hugging her. “I know that you still blame yourself for what happened a thousand years ago, just like I blame myself as well. And I love you for how much you care about me. But you must understand that I am not a little filly. I have my own plans and ploys. Haven’t I taken care of that situation with Aquestria half a year ago on my own?”
Celestia smiled as Luna reminded her of the tremendous success of her first ‘bout’ on the stage of international politics. Not only did Luna managed to avert the crisis between the sea ponies and the trading guilds, but also warmed the relations between two countries and created few thousands free job sites.
“Yes, you did, and did so better than I would.” the older alicorn finally said, nuzzling her head affectionately.
“Thank you, sister, but I’m sure you would have found a similar solution.” Luna replied, grateful for the complement. “So?”
“I will trust you on this matter.” Celestia said after a second, sighing.
“Hazah!” Luna exclaimed, but then grunted and returned to her normal demeanor. “Now that that’s over, let’s return to breakfast - I will still need to catch some sleep later.”
Twilight looked at the train station in anticipation. The train in which her brother and his wife would come to Ponyville was supposed to be here any minute now!
“Darling, calm down.” Rarity told her. “You act like a filly at Hearth’s Warming Eve.”
There were only the two of them, as it was really early, and Twilight didn’t want to drag her half-asleep friends across the town, not when they would all meet later again. She didn’t even plan to bring Rarity alone, but the mare had to get up early today to send her new line of dresses to a boutique in Canterlot, and after she was done she didn’t feel like falling asleep.
“And what is wrong with being excited to see your family?” Twilight asked.
“Nothing, but you could act more... reserved.”
Twilight snorted, but then she grinned as she spotted something over Rarity’s shoulder.
“Oh look, your fiancé is coming.” she whispered with joy.
To her credit, Rarity merely sighed, rolled her eyes, and looked behind her. Storm Clash and Serenity were still some distance away, but they quickly made their way to them once they saw them.
“What are you doing here?” Twilight asked once they’ve exchanged pleasantries.
“Sir Lightbringer sent us to welcome the Princess and the Prince to Ponyville on behalf of the Order.” Serenity explained.
Twilight wanted to ask why Matt himself hadn’t come, but at that exact moment the train appeared, approaching swiftly. It wasn’t like the usual ones that stopped in Ponyville. It was all crystallize and marked by Crystal Empire’s crest, which made sense, considering that this train served as the means of transportation for the rulers of the Crystal Empire.
The train stopped, and from the inside few clad in armor crystal guards emerged, followed closely by-
“Cadance!” Twilight exclaimed happily as she jumped over to her sister. Cadance smiled on her end as well and moved closer to her, too. “Sunshine, sunshine,” they both started, not caring at they were in the middle of the station, “ladybugs awake! Clap your hooves and do a little shake!”
They laughed as they parted, fond memories of their foalhood (well, Twilight’s foalhood at least) resurfacing, and Twilight turned to her brother.
“Hello Shining Armor!” she greeted him, hugging. “Did you have a nice journey?”
“Yes, we did.” Shining Armor replied as the train moved to make room for the one arriving from Manehatten soon.
“We can talk about it later, as well as about other things. We have a lot of catching up to.” Cadance added, and then looked at the small group of ponies. “Hello Rarity, and you, Serenity. And-”
“Initiate Storm Clash, Your Highness.” the pegasus replied with salute. “Sir Matthias send us to greet you on behalf of the Order.
“Well, that’s certainly nice of Sir Lightbringer.” Cadance replied, causing Twilight to giggle. She wondered how much this would annoy Matt. “I must say that I am anticipating the today’s ceremony... and so is the whole Crystal Empire.” she added, glancing warmly at Serenity.
The crystal pony tried to say something in reply, but her words were deafened by the arrival of the train.
“Perhaps we should leave the station.” Rarity suggested.
“I agree, though I am unsure if we should follow the royal couple as well.” Storm said, glancing at Serenity. “Sir Matthias asked us to only welcome you, and while I don’t not mind in the slightest at the prospect of guarding you, I believe you are well protected already.”
Twilight, glancing at the four crystal guards, had to admit that he was right. Despite being reformed only a month ago, the guards of the Crystal Empire looked formidable, which she knew was the merit of her brother’s training.
“You are correct, but I would like you two to accompany us for a while.” Cadance replied. “I would like to know more about you and the training Sir Lightbringer put you through.”
Both initiates nodded, and together they began making their way through the crowd, who quickly parted, due to both the presence of Princess Cadance, who radiated with beauty and love, and as well as four crystal guards and two paladin’s initiates. However, they didn’t get far, when they’ve heard:
“Storm Clash!”
Surprised, Twilight turned around, trying to locate the source of the shout. She found it. A group of three ponies, one foal and two adults, stood nearby. The one who shouted was a mare that was now making her way to them.
“Mom?!” she heard Storm Clash exclaim in shock.
three week break? on a cliffhanger? DAMN YOU!
he has a pet spider named Anub’arak !?
Ol' Matt has a hell of a sense of humor! lol!
oh you
3027981 actually, I based this joke on something that happened to me. Few years ago, when my brother and I still shared a room, I spotted a spider on a shelf above his desk. I told him that, and he responded nonchalantly, without even looking: "Yeah, that's my pet spider Stephan." or some other random name, I don't remember it now.
Arthas did more or less the same thing.
The horror, the horror!
Just kidding, enjoy your break, and post more amazing chapters when you return.
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Clearly, you haven't read my blog
oh shit, YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE!! PLEASE NO!!! WHY YOU DO THIS TO US?!/ME?!
Whoohoo! Thanks for the update, and for more Luna and Moonlight time! And I love the little pet joke you made, heh. Have fun on your dig, hopefully you'll find some antique's or old treasures!
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still pretty damned funny, lol. For some reason, i have this image in my head of 25 little flies getting ready to take on Matt's "pet spider"
3028215 he started pre reading around chapter... 36 or something, I don't recall now, so this one is on me
Three weeks... NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! ARTHAS NOW!!!!!
Chuckled at that.
My reaction to that (Luna is Matthias, Celestia is Storm, Cadence is Tucker, and the doughnuts are insults about shagging Rainbow Dash):
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Oh, and good luck surviving with no internet :D
OMG almost 100 chapters!
This won't end well...
... That's... not funny. Arthas did awful, awful things to Anub'arak.
3028998 No, he did not. Ner'zhul did. True, Arthas might have resurrected him again for the patch 3.2, but... he was the Lich King at the time.
Also, there were some discussions back in the day why the living nerubians call him "the traitor king", while talking with regret about some other undead nerubians. Once could assume that Anub'arak betrayed his people for Ner'zhul at some point, only to regret it later. Although I myself would assume that his people simply began calling him that because at the beginning, when he was raised, they pleaded him to not attack them instead of fighting back, and he did not listen.
And also, there would be a matter of whatever nerubians are evil or not. They are, after all, the descendants of aqir, and servants of the Old Gods, although... if that was the case, why did the Faceless Ones attack them during the War of the Spider? I know, they attacked them because nerubians dug too deep during the war, but if they both serve the Old Gods... also, Anub'arak was terrified when he saw the Forgotten One...
Either way, I would say that Arthas has mostly fond memories of Anub'arak (as fond as it can be, all things considering), and that's why he used his name here, as a joke.
3028044 LOL!!! I remember being in one of those fights.... unfortunately, i was always the a $$ hole getting all the aggro. .-.
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Actually, no, he did not. Anub' arak was undead before Arthas ever met him. The war of the spider took place before Arthas became the lich king. while he was a deathknight, he saw Anub'arak as a companion, a battle buddy if you will. his mentality towards his "allies" was the same when he served the LK as when he was still good. Kinda messed up, but i guess that was the little good that was left in him showing.
Th-three weeks?
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Man, you have written so much in so little time... I think that no one of us would be capable of saying something bad to you for this. Shame that this is not a break that you would deserve, but still hope that you manage to get over it, so it won’t be too hard to survive it.
You son of a gun... I'M GOING TO BE GONE ALL OF SEPTEMBER AND OCTOBER! ARGH, AND I WON'T BE BACK TILL MID NOVEMBER, I WON'T EVEN HAVE INTERNET ACCESS, NOW I HAVE TO WAIT THREE MONTHS TO SEE HOW THIS ENDS!
3029559 you... won't have interned access for TWO MONTHS?! Oh, you poor soul. Why?
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I feel sorry for you guys, I really do.
I was without internet practically the whole summer!!
IT WAS HORRIBLEEEE
holy shit it's a conspiracy.
SKYNET IS TAKING OVER- hah lol jk jk.
But really, I feel for you guys.
Also, a small error I noticed
it should say
:P
Arthus you troll!
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Military training, basically the Air force is going to put me through a cross training/retraining/required-for-training/basic-training-all-over-again thingy, electric bugaloo 2, really, it's just some additional training the Air force wants me to take, like a pre requisite course to becoming a Airman First class, or so I'm told. It's nice because that means I am going to be moving up in the world of the chair force. But it's shit because I have no idea where they are sending me to, and I don't know what kind of course they putting me through, all I really know for sure is that during which time I am gone, I will not have access to phones, unless its a dire emergency, internet, TV, and all that good, luxurious stuff.
There is a lot of other stuff I have been hearing about it, and from what I have generally heard, it's just basic training, where the D.I.s don't think your a retarded 5 year old, and don't yell at the erections of the trainees who woke up with morning wood, or force feed them to eat broccoli because they don't like it, (I have stories, I swear, D.I.s are fucking insane).
And I am told to be expecting to leave around the end of August, or some time in September, that's at least what my C.O. is telling me, there is also a very slim chance that they will boot me up my leave date up to Novemberish, if the class fills before I get processed.
So right now, I'm just waiting for the letter with the date to come in. And honestly, it's not all that bad, I get paid through it, at least, I think I am... Oh well, what happens, happens, at least I have finishing this story to look forward to when I come back, that and the ten or so odd stories I have been following.
In royalty, I was always thought "majesty" only applied to kings and queens, not princesses. Though with the rather unusual tag applied to a practically immortal alicorn princess...I don't know...
I might just be trying to be too technical. Oh well. No biggie.
that's some good naming skills! giving a pet spider the name of an undead crypt lord.
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Watch as the mighty cat of the lightbringer slays the undead lord of a crypt. Sterotypical for cats anyway to kill spiders. All the cats I know have.
Hey next villain should be some pony version of a wow characters maybe someone who know Arthas
http://www.wowwiki.com/Jaina
http://www.wowwiki.com/Varian
A pet spider named Anub'arak? That really got me
...ok..sleep...project eclipse...or other fics I have to read????its just so hard to decide
3039212 No worries, thanks for the heads up. but I am afraid that things won't be changed for the next while. I hope you enjoy the reading so far.
3048016 Oh it's no problem, though you will be seeing my comments for each chapter being posted with mistakes shown due to a force of habit as you can probably see with the other chapters prior to the one I replied to. Hope the author enjoys his little dig trip (lol wut) and passes.
I just remembered, just over a week for training? Isn't that a bit short?
3070918 close but no cigars.
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Right let's see here:
First off, why was Arthas so suddenly redeemed? This does not make sense. There has on multiple occations in World of Warcraft, been stated that Arthas has no chance of redemption or finding peace in the afterlife: Tirion's Gambit where Tirion Fordring explicitly states that there is no good within Arthas, only shadowy memories, at Arthas deathbed where he states he sees nothing but darkness before him and just to let it sink in Sylvanas states Arthas could find no peace in the afterlife. Here hound found nothing but darkness as that was the essence of his soul, there was no light as he chose to abandon it. What, did the light suddenly decide: Hey that Arthas guy may not have been so bad after all, let’s give him another chance? If there was even the slightest chance of Arthas ever being able to redeem himself, he should have seen some light in the dark while he died. It does not make sense that it should pop up so suddenly after a few months without any explanation.
To redeem a person in accordance to Warcraft story requires that there is some good, some light inhabiting a person. Arthas went to extreme lengths to ensure that there was to be no goodness left within him (killing Mathias Lehner inside his mind, cutting out his hearth and later initiating a ritual that was meant to destroy his hearth) so how could he possibly be redeemed? How would the light affect him when he purposely went to such extreme lengths to remove it from his spirit?
Secondly. Why did he suddenly have a change of hearth and decided to save the three fillies that were under attack? Arthas is evil, he would kill anyone if it suited his needs, his prime ambition was the total extermination of all life. As said before, he purposely went to extreme lenghts to remove all sense of honor, empathy and all other emotions that would have held him back in his grand crusade of death, why would he so suddenly care about the lives of three small fillies?
Thirdly. How come Ner'zhul is still alive inside the Helm of Domination. Arthas killed him to consume his spirit as to cojoin their powers but leave him as the dominant personality of the Lich King. I Ner'zhul has no soul anymore, it was eaten by Arthas. If there even was just the slightest fragment of Ner'zhul's spirit remaining inside the Helmet, he would have used Arthas' death to regaig control of the helmet and the Scourge. Chris Metzen has specifically stated that Ner'zhul is completely dead and gone.
The story seems to take place after Edge of Night as Arthas states he felt Sylvanas, thus Sylvanas would be familiar with the presence of Arthas in the dark afterlife. In the later chapters it is stated that Sylvanas is still running her campaign through Lordaeron as seen in game. But as Sylvanas was slain by Godfrey at the end the Silverpine campaign before being resurrected by the Val’kyrs, would she not sense the lacking presence of Arthas in the afterlife, realize the implications of this and thus spend more of her time and strength and the Val’kyrs towards finding were Arthas went so she can kill him once more rather than spending it all on a (by comparison) senseless campaign?
Other than that, a pretty good story.
"That's my pet spider Anub'Arak"
Then the pet speaks: "I SERVE ONLY THE FROZEN THROOONE!"
3032429 I think Lauren Faust wanted them to be queens in the first place but... ugh... well, you probably know what the first Princess Celestia toy looked like, right?
Well, wake me up when September-- uh, nevermind. I do love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. The whole Light thing ist really awesome. But I really think Matt should do something about his whole "fun" thing with Dashie and ask Twilie for forgiveness... I think when I moved I'm going to unpack my WoW books first...
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Wow, this is one well thought out comment. I will try to explain how come things in my story are like they are as best I can. (And yes, I am back a week earlier than I said I would, but it is only a one-day break, I will be away from the internet tomorrow.)
To explain why in my story Arthas is... redeemed, lets get back to how he became, for the lack of a better world, 'evil'. Those who know the lore by heart know that it wasn't just him taking Frostmourne. It was a long process that transformed him from the champion of the Light into the Lich King. I would say that Culling of Stratholme is where it has all began for him, when he was 'forced' to kill his own subjects, then later when he lied to his men and betrayed the mercenaries that fought for him... However, I have a feeling you know all of that, so I will skip to what I want to say.
In contrast to what I said earlier... When he took Frostmourne, it took his soul. We can argue as to what that means, by that is the fact which we all know. Now, I don't say that after that Arthas was some mindless guy that did everything the Lich King told him; but he was guided, heard whispers that gave him power, and opened new possibilities. But... his soul, his humanity, was taken.
Some of it survived, though, and took a form of Matthias Lehner. It, too, was destroyed... by the very same Frostmourne that suck the souls of those it slais. Now, bear with me; since it was a fragment of Arthas (btw, ever seen Red vs. Blue?), then it could be theorized that it was also sucked into the Frostmourne, where it rejoined the soul of Arthas. As for the heart and the ghost of Matthias Lehner in Icecrown... There are two possibilities why we see him: either that ghost isn't Arthas' humanity, but an apparition of the Old Gods that wanted to weaken the Lich King, or it is because of the reasons I presented in chapter 73: you can never destroy the heart of somebody. We can see if further, when there is still enough humanity left in the Lick King to stop himself from using the Scourge to annihilating all life on Azeroth.
But lets move on. As we all know, the Lich King was defeated when Tirions broke free from his icy prison, and shattered Frostmourne, releasing all the souls inside of it, who in tern suspended the Lich King in the air, allowing the adventures to slain him.
All the souls.
Including Arthas'.
I know that people might have interpreted the cinematic at the end differently, but in my opinion Arthas was... begging his father for this to be all over. From that, I came to a conclusion that once the Lich King was slain (for I think it was sort off a different persona than Arthas, but not exactly), Arthas' soul returned to his body, giving him back his full humanity and ability to feel for others. I know this can be considering stretching it, but provided this is true, can you imagine what he must have felt in his dying moments? How horrified he was, how sorry for all he has done?
But just being sorry isn't enough. As he died, all he saw was darkness, and that's where he went.
But, after just two months, he was brought back to life. I would love to explain the reasons for that, but... that would spoil the plot, now wouldn't it? I will say for now that I plan to explain everything at some point of the story, and that everything includes why Arthas was given a chance of redemption.
For your second point, as to why he saved those three fillies... The Arthas in this story isn't exactly the same as the one we know from playing WoW and from reading "Arthas: Rise of the Lich King". It's a person that is reaping from a lifetime of mistakes, who once again possesses heart and ability to love and care for others. I know that his character wasn't as simple as that, that he slowly made himself more evil, by killing his subjects and Matthias... But in my story, this is how it is: he got his soul back, and he honestly regrets everything he has done. He helped the fillies because that was what the Prince he once was would do.
But, I don't mean that he is once again the Arthas he was before the Scourge came. He is still a person that committed all those crimes, for which he will always feel guilty, and because of that, he is wiser, humbler, and less prideful than he was as a human - for he now knows what kind of monster he was, and could still become.
You said that he went to great lengths to remove everything that would slow him down in his path to eradicate all life. But now he has all of that back, and he can barely bear it.
As for your third point, why Ner'zhul is there... well, it's basically the fault of consistency. I originally planed to have Ner'zhul gone for good, but when I thought about it... If I came to a conclusion that Arthas soul, humanity and all was returned to him once the Frostmourne was shattered, then Ner'zhul, who was also sucked by it (even if it happened in the Lich King's mind), had also the be freed... to the extent. He was still bound to the Lich King, and that's why he is now with Bolvar.
Sylvanas... I would assume that she simply didn't thought to much about missing Arthas. I mean, she only felt him there because he searched for her once he felt something familiar; then he quickly disappeared. I would imagine that the place where souls of the damned go is rather big, so when Sylvanas came for half a minute, she wasn't searching for anybody.
I hope my explanation was of any help as to why things in my story are as they are. I don't expect you to agree with them, of course: you are inclined to your own opinion. But this is how I see Arthas, and least from the side of this story.
3106242 Paid, not payed. And no, it's just a habit I've gone and well... gotten.
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But the whining and crying is part of her manipulative persona! I love it! Different strokes for different folks though.
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I guess I can dig that, though I still doubt Arthas soul was trapped inside Frotsmourne, at least not in the same sense as others (such as Terenas). He may or may not have felt regret following his defeat, though the idea of him regaining his humanity after the losing the Helm of Domination is quite interesting. Perhaps a small flicker of Arthas was pained due to all the terrible things he had done and simply wanted to die as to end it, and that this part of him may have resurfaced after losing the influence of the Helm of Domination and was happy that it was now over. Personally I have always felt that Arthas' final words were more out of relief rather than regret.
As to Mathias Lehner, he was not an apperition of the Old Gods, neither was he the remaining Light inside Arthas, he was simply the "Shadows of the past" remaining in Arthas' hearth that Tirion Fordring referred to in "Tirion's Gambit", and was (probably) destroyed together with Arthas' hearth or atleast lost his form.
Anyways, without some small continuity errors (in my eyes), a very good story. I feel like you have captured Athas' personality before his fall quite well, and you have done a good job to intersperse Arthas with the canon events. I still disagree with the Ner'zhul theory though, but that is just how my mind works.
Needs a sex tag.
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Que? You don't make sense with that response. Please clarify
3114935 Azerothian in Equestria? A i E.
3113282 lawl naw
3109694 Just as Darkness can never be truly destroyed, the Light can never be forever snuffed out.
it was the first time that I saw a pony have nightmare about light instead of darkness
Who he was, to assume what the Grand Master of the Order would say?
Storm listened to his words, letting them sunk in
There will be also few nobles, few citizens of Ponyville
and although she let her voice sound threateningly
broken only by occasional clang of spoons
and created few thousands free job sites
Hazah
It was all crystallize and marked
“Sir Matthias send us to greet you on behalf of the Order.
I must say that I am anticipating the today’s ceremony
1. It was the first time I saw a pony have nightmares about the light instead of darkness.
2. Who was he, to assume what the Grand master of the Order would say?
3. Sink.
4. There will also be a few nobles, a few citizens of Ponyville.
5. Threatening.
6. Broken only by the occasional clang of spoons.
7. And created a few thousand free job sites.
8. Huzzah.
9. Crystallized.
10. Forgot your closing quotation mark and Sent.
11. I must say that I am anticipating today's ceremony.
Un-believable! XD All this time i was thinking 'man, i know Tucker out has to be a reference from 'somewhere'... but 'where'... the bow chicka repitition is SOOOOO familiar!'
Coincidentally I have also recently started watching Red Vs Blue again, cause it's been ages since some time that i thought they had quit XD
And literally a bare minute ago It hit me as I entered season 4 XD It's 'that' Tucker... It's been soooo long since I watched RvB, and yet it still made me feel stupid for not picking up on such a thing XD If only caboose was around!
3879024 Well you gone ahead yet?