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KennaLougheed


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a powerful elemental magi

The word "magi" is plural; the singular is "mage".

What kind of story is this if you just killed one of the main characters in the first chapter already!!??

Also, the summary itself feels false, because one of them actually "died"!?

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I put forth exactly what I meant on that. This is just the first chapter.

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