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Through some unknown means, Luna has been given the chance to stop her and her sister from making the biggest mistakes of their lives. Though it may cost her more than she realizes.


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Great now there's a timelines with 2 Lunas and 1 Celestia what are the Lunas to do fight over the moon?

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Welp
...guess we have a timeline to fix
So uhh who wants to be Nightmare moon
Also Hello Friendo

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Hello again friendo hopefully it doesn't come to that after the heart to heart but I assume that young luna would be sent to the moon to preserve the timeline

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Yeah i know
But the timeline must be protected

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Tis just one timeline out of billions being created I'm sure things will be fine if we let events play out as normal......but just in case I'll ready the erase button

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You got it
we should probably not rp too much here so ill see you around

Ok this was fun and the idea was lovely. Thank you for the words.

Ok the world building in this oneshot is fantastic the dynamic and interactions of the characters was phenomenal, if there is any chance of a continuation or a sequel I would definitely read good job.

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I did leave the door open for it.

Is this a sequel to something? I double-checked the story's main page, and didn't see any mention of it being part of a verse of a sequel, but it does feel like a sequel type of story.

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No it is not a sequel.

interesting, then amusing, then intriguing


looking forward to a continuation

Methinks the world she came from no longer exists.

"You destroyed your own timeline. Was it worth it?"
"... Yes, yes it was."

Meanwhile, in the future of an alternate reality, Ex-Princess Celestia knocks on a door.

"Luna, you've been in there for hours! Did you fall in or something? I have to go!"

Another well done one shot with enough world building to become somthing more. I find my self wanting to know what the world is going to do with two Lunas now... As well as how many problmes can be avoided and how many will becuased beacsue of what the extra Luna knows.

So I think I know where my requests will be going.

Now, I want to see where this goes.

Ah Luna, once one changes the timestream, you have to go back to before the split before going forward again ...

Well this certainly is a fun story I,m not sorry you decided to continue it needed more context and would have been a waist of a good plot, I look forward to more in the future.

Interesting. Well, there is no way the future is going to be the same now...

And wait is that the upcoming big bad we see?

That was a good story so far goodluck with the rest of it.

This is the few FICs that portrays Luna housey is in the show a straightforward character that doesn't do the sneaking around unless she really has to the one who cut straight through the bullshit. Says what she wants does what she wants and sometimes says fuck the consequences. I like this version of Luna.

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