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Grimmdark1993


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May I suggest running the chapters through open office with the English correction on? There were quite a few typos that slightly broke the flow of reading, especially as a nonnative speaker of English.

Did I miss something? When did Chrysalis and Twilight get there?

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The discovered crate was pried open once the princesses set boundary wards and the most powerful magic casters were present; this included, Chrysalis, Discord, Sombra, and Tirek [at this point and I added the part to write chysalis in].

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