I thought that it would be a little hard to see that flash of light, since I am a heavy sleeper, but strange enough I saw It.
When I heard a noise that night I didn't expect it to be instead of a robber, a.....visitor or two you could say.
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When I awoke in the middle of the night only to find two pony like siloutes out in my backyard, suddenly thinking i was about to get robbed I grabbed the first thing I saw, a baseball bat. Of all the weapons I could have gotten, I had to get a baseball bat. As I walked to the back door I slowly slid open the door and watched as the two sillouetes stood idle, I ran out as fast as I could, and smacked on upside the head with the bat. The loud bang made me think I busted its skull open, then out of nowhere the other ran in the house and hid. I shut the door and turned on the light, only to find a freaked out, technicolor, lavender, cartoon pony staring at me in my futurama boxer shorts.
I was about ready to smack my skull in with the bat, when twilight with a shocked expresssion on her face said "WHAT THE TARTARUS IS GOING ON!!!!"
I had slowly replied "uhhhh, hmm let me see, oh yeah YOU BROKE INTO MY UNIVERSE AND APPEARED IN MY BACKYARD!".
She put a poker face on, and said "wait...wait...wait, did you say your universe?"
"yes indeed I did why?" I said
"CELESTIA'S TITS!! I AM IN ANOTHER UNIVERSE!!!" she shouted
she trotted over to the glass door and muttered a curse under her breath.
"Okay who did I smack over the head with a baseball bat?" I asked,
"Pinkie..." Twilight replied
"Just wonderful, I got the smartass and the pink tornado from hell" I said
"okay let me get this straight....one, how did you get here...full story now!" I yelled.
"This is exactly how it happened, I was in my lab busy with the studies of magic and all, when pinkie comes in and starts to mess with my potions, so I try to teleport her out of there when suddenly we were transported here." twilight explained.
I knew this was going to be a long night, so I got out a few sleeping bags I had stored in my garage, and rolled them out.
"okay pinkie goes here you go here." I said as I pointed to both sleeping bags, then it hit me...pinkie was bleeding outside, in the dirt. I grabbed a flowery beach towel and got pinkie, from outside carrying her with the towel under her head catching the blood. I set her on the sleeping bag and walk away. I almost felt bad for her, almost.
I slowly craw back in bed hoping this is all and illusion and it will be gone in the morning.
Dude. I can kinda see where the dislikes come from. This story is way too rushed. You should take some time, introduce the characters, explain his backstory, but so far not bad for a first fic.