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Layri_Cheetah


Spiritual union of man and beast. Brony-writer from Russia.

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Queen Chrysalis deemed her latest plan to be impeccable. No longer would she resign herself to the slow and meager amounts of love she got from reconnaissance, infiltrations, and abductions; no, to acquire love—vast quantities of love—she needed to masquerade as something universally adored and rather inconspicuous, like perhaps a lollipop?

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Beta-readind and text edit by - EpicGamer10075.

Original story (rus-lang) - "Chrysalick".

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Comments ( 15 )

I don’t know what to say… I load up this site and the first thing I see is your story with that picture of Celestia. I mean. I’m not being mean. It’s completely hilarious.

Most Glorious Celestia Pic ever.

Where did you get this!!!!!!!????? :ajsmug: :rainbowlaugh: :trollestia:

I must kiss the end of Tia's adorable nose! 😘💖💖💖

The one problem with that cover art is that I fear it just might upstage the whole fic it's been attached too. :rainbowlaugh:

Yeah, that translation ain’t super great. It’s definitely better than what Google would give out, but with the awkward format, imprecise verbiage, and lacking detail, this does show shy it’s much better to have a human translator so that the intent of the work can be properly moved over.

I have enough experience in writing fan-fics that I could do it myself in an hour or two, and do a bit of extra cleanup that I think would also be necessary in this story’s original language. You can PM me if you’d like that.

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When the snoot decides to boop you.

"Chrysalick" has been updated. Big thank EpicGamer10075 for beta-readind and text edit.

Должен отметить что обложка примерно на 20% круче рассказа.

May be. And this cover perfectly shows one of the moments of this story:

‘This is the most disastrous thing to occur to any of my plans!’ Chrysalis thought in horror, observing above her an immense alabaster muzzle, its unfathomably dark nostrils flaring inquisitively, engulfed her in hot, intermittent breaths.

Queen Chrysalis deemed her latest plan to be impeccable.

I don't even know the plan yet, but I already know it will probably fail spectacularly.

‘What now?’ Pondered the Queen, levitated alongside the Princess as she sauntered past various shops.

Maybe do the same thing you intended to do for any other pony?
I mean you did have a plan for the case someone actually bought you, right?

‘I would never have imagined that I would be licke-e-ed... oh, so much love,’ Chrysalis mewled, beginning to literally melt from the touch of such a hot tongue.

Isn't that what you wanted in the first place?

Closing their eyes, almost resting their noses against each other, Celestia and Luna enjoyed a sensual game, now and then touching their tongues and hearing the other’s heated breaths.

:twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops:


Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.

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There are some definite positives to this translation, like ‘Your M-m-motherbug!’ which gives the impression of Chrysalis speaking a bug pun mat, which is hilarious.

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"Your M-m-motherbug!" - these puns are also in the original text.

Jog

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Also I've always loved that image in the cover, it's just so great.

Comment posted by Koneeb deleted Dec 1st, 2023
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