Being the first alicorn prince can be terrifying. Luckily, the prince has a guard that can protect him.
Warning: Contains mild transphobia and misgendering
Written for the M/M Shipping Contest 3
Trans đłď¸ââ§ď¸ He/Him| Just trying my best|Commissions are 10 USD per chapter. Dm me if you have any questions
Being the first alicorn prince can be terrifying. Luckily, the prince has a guard that can protect him.
Warning: Contains mild transphobia and misgendering
Written for the M/M Shipping Contest 3
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Nice story, I hope this will lead to a much longer romance story, keep it up.
a very interesting story
I'm guessing it's moderately early in trans-stallion Twilight Sparkle's transition.
Hoping to see more of Mr. Sparkle's journey. Though I gotta wonder , if this is his first appearance as himself; wouldn't some kind of interview or news release happen first? And I can't see Celestia not supporting her faithful student and being among the first to see them. Like I'd imagine it'd be friends, family, the Princesses, and lastly boyfriend. I kind of wanted to see more.
Pretty bold and thanks for writing for the cause.
This was so damn heartwarming. There's so many moments I've got to highlight and praise. I loved Rarity being the one to gift Twilight his gala outfit (a beautiful post-transition reprisal of her custom gala tailoring for each of the Mane Six in the show). I loved Flash's not-so-unintentional pratfall into the table to distract from the adverse remarks toward Twilight. And I loved Flash's consistent, patient validation toward Twilight throughout. Their dance together at the end was the perfect note to end on. Flash's ability to joke with Twilight and lift his mood after such a disappointing and hurtful event made their relationship feel so sincere and lived in.
You also really captured some very empathetic tension between Twilight's sense of duty to his subjects and their ignorant remarks. The fact that Twilight felt the need to excuse their behavior was all too real and also very in-character for Twilight; of course he would want to think the best of everyone. I also think you made a very insightful decision to include the remark from the mare offering her gym membership among the out-and-out transphobia from the other gala attendees. It was a clever way to incorporate a subtler form of oppressive language a trans stallion might experience, hidden behind the guise of validation. Though painful, I enjoy seeing bits of nuance like this appear in stories addressing trans identity. It gives them resonance.
Your iteration of Twilight and Flash's relationship was really enjoyable. If you decide to explore more between them, I'd love to read it!
oof, relatable
augh of course Rarity saves the day! she would know just what Twilight needs here
i always love it that the intersection of gender and clothing and self-expression for ponies does not perfectly align with how it is for humans since going without clothes is always an option for them
augh, heartbreaking to see Twilight doing his classic Twilighting about this as well
aww i love it!
hey thatâs the name of the story!
that does sound quite tedious
oof! with this and the other examples you do a great job in staying in the lines of showing a kind of transphobia that, while still invalidating and awful, is something i can see ponies doing. (i can especially see the businessmare!)
hehehe, i love Flashâs plan and how thoroughly he owns it
hehe Flash is so good at this!
and augh, what a perfectly heartwarming scene to end it with! i just adore the way you wrote Flash and Twilightâs relationship here. lovely fluff, thank you for writing!