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Newtimestonight
I’m new to writing fanfics so please bear with me.
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Based on the graphic descriptions of violence I'd say this needs to be rated M.
There's also some issues with punctuation and grammar; there are a lot of missing apostrophes. Example:
Sunset should have an apostrophe between the T and the final S (as it's the body belonging to Sunset).
Setting that aside, Sonata seems to have forgotten that the Sirens' plan was to enslave all of humanity with their music.
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Thank you so much, I’ll keep these in mind and go fix the mistakes now.
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Np.
This is actually an interesting concept. Someone so sweet and kind being broken is amazing by itself. But being broken by the heroes is even better.
Very twisty concept done well.
I think it'd help to break some of the super long paragraphs I to chunks of smaller paragraphs.