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Rainbow Dash after playing pranks on Rarity all day, Rarity makes a master plan to return the favor.
Rainbow Dash, haven't you learned your lesson?
This story is a request from jBlazer So, thanks to him we have this! 
Another Big Hit (Featured on 9/3/2023) Thank you all for reading favorites and likes I'm glad my efforts really paid off. 
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Has she learnt her lesson? Probably not, knowing Dash
Interresting premise, yet poorly executed. Grammatical errors and a too fast pacing being the most prominent here.
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About grammatical errors it may be true, because I am not even a native english speaker, I am a spanish speaker.
Are you loco, tio? Fast pacing was necessary in this story, with a simple and not very deep plot like this, you can't go too deep, or add external elements to slow it down, this is simply a lesson in friendship and how to put yourself in the other person's shoes because it might be funny for you to prank your friends, but what do they think of those pranks, how would it make them feel?
If I add more elements, it would move away from what I was trying to convey with this story and the person who asked me for the request was very specific with what he wanted.
In short, this is a simple story that doesn't try to be deep, it is just a comedy with very valuable learning about relationships with your friends.