Life is Fleeting
written by headless_rainbow
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Just a nitpick, but some parts are confusing near the half of the story because Soarin/Thunderlane's names are used wrong.For example:
"Thunder’s shaft slipped out of her mouth, but Fleetfoot kept her mouth open as Thunder’s replaced it, the male straddling her chest"
"You just want an excuse to get fucked again by Soarin, slut.Meanwhile she saw Spitfire sitting in Thunderlane’s lap.Drink it slut! Thunderlane finally growled as she felt his cock pulse in her burning throat"
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I'll make any corrections that are pointed out. What is the way those should be?
Fucking amazing work once again, loved this. It’s a really funny n hot scenario between a bunch of bisexuals just committing the… most outlandish type of crime. I love it.
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Outlandish is a good word. I think for a lot of people this is one of those things that is so terrible that it wraps around and becomes funny. Hot either way though.