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TheRayH
Spanish, Brony since 2013 and with a creative story writer (mostly). Favorite pony: Twilight Sparkle; Favorite EG: Sunset Shimmer; Favorite G5 Pony: Izzy Moonbow
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My favourite part is the misspelling
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Well of course i have misspelling, i'm human and i'm allowed to make mistakes, also english is not my main language and finally... sometimes the red underliner that indicates a spelling error does not appear. So... yeah, i should work on that a bit
Sometimes I avoid reading fanfic when there is a bet on going out with someone you normally wouldn't go out with because afterwards everything turns out bad and sad... but here they are both aware of the deal so I'm going to give them the opportunity.
I thought you would expand more to get the conversation about the deal, so from what I understand doing what a couple would normally do (holding hands, hugging and even kissing) did I understand correctly?
The issue got hot 馃槒 this fic is catching my attention every time 馃槈 I hope for the next chapter soon. I felt the reference to "Kaguya-sama: Love Is War" 馃徆鈾ワ笍 unless it's just a coincidence
This is the closest thing I've read to Rarijack's "friends with benefits" and I'm surprised I haven't found any so far (although this is "he who falls in love first loses"馃槄) or that someone makes a "we're just friends" when in reality they are very close to be simple friends 馃挏馃А (I say this because of the fanart I have seen) and apparently it's a joke from the rarejack shipp XD
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Some of the stories involving Rarijack go straight to the point as far as i've read some. The fate of both girls is already decided but i wanted to make it a bit of a very heated trip for Applejack, so it would be a hard task for her to not fall in love. For what's to come there will still be more chapters developing it.
Damn dude Aj is too overconfident at that.
Aint no way she wont fall in love with Rarity.
Im here crackling up at the misspell.
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I'm really sorry for the misspellings, i have stated multiple times that english is not my mother language and i try my best to not mess up anything in terms of writting. Really, really sorry if that makes writting a lot more harder
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No need to apologize about something like that.You cant do anything against it.
Again dont worry about misspelling,its human nature.And after all I think theyre a bit funny and they make me laugh
hahahaha I liked Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle's point of view... it made me laugh since they were seeing it out of context
I know a little about lingerie, but does she wear it in public? since there are few clothes
No, AJ, you went too far... even before reading this part I said to myself "I don't think he's that insensitive to celebrate his victory when Rarity is opening her heart to him, right?馃え" and in the end I was right
If Sweetie Belle went to Rarity's room at the beginning of the chapter because of the moaning... imagine what will happen now that AJ is with Rarity 馃槀
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Time to clarify stuff
Rarity wearing lingerie is not a problem as it is normal to wear those underneath clothing; i forgot to tell that she was dressed with that set underneath, that's my bad.
I find it funny that you reffer to AJ as him and not her, as Applejack is female, just a thing that i find funny.
And for what Sweetie is about to do, you'll have to wait for next chapter
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oh okay and regarding AJ referring to 'he' instead of 'her' it must have been a translation error since I use a translator to comment
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I kinda figured it because i saw extracts from the text in spanish (which i speak since it's my mother language). But no worries, read as you please