(they/them) writing about ponies kissing and hugging and making terrible mistakes (pfp by evelili! https://evelili.tumblr.com/post/731980670351622144/free-icons-for-u-nd-ur-partner-in-crime )
On the upper floor of Carousel Boutique, Twilight Sparkle, Princess of Friendship, Sleepovers, and Having Hot Marefriends, presides over her court. But intrigue sneaks into the sleepy setting when Rarity's palette book brings up new questions like "how many words are there for the color blue?"
Rated T for Rainbow calling Twilight a pit sniffer and also general implications of pony boinking.
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Really good first (posted) story, awesome prose, n I love how in character everyone feels. Good job, I look forward to seeing more of your work!
Oh, I loved this. The characters voices are just so spot on, and they're all witty and the narration is witty and I could not stop squeeing the entire time I read it
Ponycule stuff is always such a joy
Looking forward to those bottomless angst pits, too
Adorable! I can't wait to trudge into the angst pits!
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thank you! looking forward to posting more soon.
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i'm glad you enjoyed it! accurate characterization, cuteness, and a little humor was exactly the balance i was aiming for, so i'm glad it came through.
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rubbing my hands together gleefully
This was super funny, the banter and the narration is so goofy and fun. Awesome fic!
curple
noun
I'd be mair vauntie o' my hap,
Douce hingin owre my curple,
Than ony ermine ever lap,
Or proud imperial purple.
Robert Burns - The Answer, to the Guidwife of Wauchope-House*
Not suggesting that's really workable either, but the second definition was just too apropos not to mention.
*I realize that, when giving an example of how something's a real word, quoting a poem explicitly written in a dialect most would find incomprehensible may not be as helpful as I'd hope, but it's the best example I got. Plus, I just like Burns.
Very sweet and fun. I loved seeing the little bits of growth for each pony snuck into the story. n_n
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god DAMN *deletes the entire story*
for real i'm impressed lol. a perfect rhyme AND it's thematically appropriate? i guess that leaves ponies with only 'orange' as a word infamously unrhymable with common words. truly their world is better than our own
Awesome! I simply adore good stories with them being a polycule. ^^
God what an absolute TREAT! Genuinely was smiling the whole way through, so many of your gags are absolute GENIUS and everything is perfectly in character! The dynamics... they are delightful, your honor.
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thank you!!! i live for the dynamics. i'll die for the dynamics