I only read one other MK story that actually got me interested. I vote (B) because why not?

Johnny Cage, no contest. He's a warrior deep down. Of course he'll prove it going against Rainbow too lol

Or Applejack. Also i have written potential fatalities for Rainbow Dash. You wanna see?

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Show me what you had in mind Velvet. I’m those who would not ignore ideas from others. Make it sound good and I guarantee Rainbow’s fatality will be somewhere in this fanfic. I will give you credit when I add the fatality on the chapter BTW.

Why not start with Johnny Cage?

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I'm guessing you vote for (B).

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it's not really a suggestion but if you wanna add it in. I wouldn't complain lol

Buckball. Far. BDFF High Punch
- Rainbow Dash smirked as she jumped back, flew some distance away from her opponent. She then swoop in, gliding fast with powerful flap of her wings. As she near her dazed opponent she didn't give them a chance to react as she delivered a devastating uppercut which decapitated their head off high into the air. She then flew up catching up to the air borne head and using her momentum kicked it hard back towards the headless corpse. The head flew through the body leaving a large gaping hole before it collapse.

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I'll call it the Brutal Buckball. I like it, by the way.

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Yes, if not the choice is up to you, it's your story.

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It's a reference to Liu Kang's Shaolin Soccer Fatality MK:Shaolin Monks game

Do you think the ponies will have enough "balls" to kill with the likes of Shao Kahn and his evil minions?

Because, their pacifist ways with "Friendship is Magic" ain't going to help them out here.

P.S. I will give out choices that will change the story outcome. You will be forced to make bad choices during this story. The one with the most vote becomes the next chapter. Choose wisely because there will be no turning back!

Damn, it's one of those chosing stories.

Guest Editor: JDPrime22

Well that explains it.

Starlight made a 'Are you serious face' at Discord. She then smiled and used her magic to control the schoolgirl doll and made her use an energy blast that originated from Starlight. The small explosion destroyed the karate guy. She was leaving half of his body unvaporized.

Frowning at this, Discord finally looked at Starlight eye to eye and spoke. "That was unnecessary."

"Well, I win. Fatality!" She taunted along with the schoolgirl doll.

You wouldn't feel so proud of yourself, if you bare witness to one of the Mane Six, Spike, Trixie, or even yourself end up tragically in a real Fatality.

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If Earthrealm was able to hold their own in Mortal Kombat, I can see Equestria doing the same thing. Plus, their pacifist ways will change over time through the 'bloodlust.'

Let’s vote B)

My interest in this story has peaked, and I can’t wait to see more.

Try to improve the grammar of your story a bit. I feel like reading all the dialogue is so sloppy, you could ask an editor to help you with it.

I imagine that Grogar will be Discord, something that Twilight and company won't like as it happened in the series, or perhaps this time they will be two different characters. The point is that if the Draconequus does something stupid, he's going to get some serious Brutality.

I also hope that Sindel finds out the truth and faces Shao Kahn as well as the Legion of Doom. By the way: I choose option B.

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Thanks for the advice. Question though...How can I ask an editor to help me?

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You can ask for an editor here:

https://www.fimfiction.net/group/214974/the-insane-creators-guild

Or, if you prefer, you can also post a blog where you request an editor for your story.

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What do you think now? I didn't ask for help as I found a tool on Grammarly that helped me greatly.

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Much better. Always remember to check your grammar, respect punctuation marks and try to make the dialogues feel natural.

You will do excellent with your crossover.

Where’s the next chapter?

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Since school/college are back, I had to get a lot of things started to get into my classes. But I have put my best effort for the story. All that’s left to do is to make the fight scenes, and make an ending scene for the chapter.

(To be honest…it’s a lot harder to make your own story than it seems.)