Following the battle with Discord and Ponyville’s near destruction, Twilight explores the Everfree to investigate lost chaos magic in the cursed forest. However, what she finds in the ruined castle proves more shocking than any amount of chaos magic.
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Is it really possible to do that?
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What?
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Yes, I just edited the document by making my own stuff.
I saw this coming from a mile away but this point right here is I think the part where he should have realized this ain't what you want.
Okay, thanks for that clarification. That would have bothered me for months.
Quite good
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I'm sorry you feel that way, but both Alicorn's sisters are as strong or stronger than her. Also, I'm planning the next chapter to have something special to change Storm Breaker's position.
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It's heavily implied that stormbreaker has been feeling guilt about the fact that King Platinum denied Storm Breaker her end. it's plainly obvious she wants to be dead since she can't even handle the world as it is right now and I'd rather that be the end of it. Yeah yeah having a ancient pony adjust to modern day as a thing after all Luna was the one who started the trope. But seriously can we have one story where they actually get the end they want? Where they die before this whole trope happens? No one that I've looked into has really done a story where her after all the buildup they still die the way they wanted to in the beginning. The only reason I haven't written the story like that is because I can't do that kind of existential drama I'm not suicidal and thinking about my characters in that way could cause me to fall into that mindset myself since I have manic depression, I put a lot of myself into my writing so much so that at times I find myself acting like my characters or my characters act more like me than anyone else writing about a character that wants to die would be a bit of a risk for me due to how I write sadly.
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For my my story, I wanted the theme to be based around identity and finding your place in the world. Storm breaker’s obsession with her warriors death will get revealed more as the story goes on, but, in short, involve heavily with her hatred of other races along side with her past experiences.
I’m building storm breakers character to be based around the idea of no matter who you are or how you’ve grown up, you can still find your place i the world.
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To each their own. I'm enjoying the story I just was hoping that someone would finally do the whole subverting the expectation thing and at the end have them get their death as they wanted, maybe make it a noncanon epilogue chapter at the end of the story or something like that for like a Halloween special you know? you've already got the dark tag so why not. Sure it's only the beginning of July but Halloween sneaks up on you very quickly
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I'll keep that in mind. :)