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While your thrill-seeking wife, Celestia, is a big fan of attractions like water coasters, you're a bit less excited by the prospect. Even still, you're pretty sure it will be a fun time. At least, that's what you thought until the coaster broke down with the two of you still on it. It doesn't help that waiting for the coaster to be fixed may take a bit longer than either of you had hoped.
And you having nothing to do in the meantime.
Rating and tag for scritch-based innuendo.
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Oh, Celestia
Another great story.
Been there. Was not fun. Got stuck on a Gravitron when the primary motors failed, and because this was a small county fair, we had to wait almost an hour before it got fixed in a stuffy room with almost 20+ other people in near darkness.
Cute Celestia is best Celestia. Looks like she might like her ears scratched a little too much
I never have, so I can imagine it's not a fun time to put it lightly.
This was overall pretty nice and sweet. My/Anon interactions with Celestia were cute, and it was weirdly cute and funny seeing her get putty. I didn't see much I could give any constructive criticism for, but one thing I thought was notable was this.
Going by this story alone, I didn't see anything in those lines that would point at who was talking, Anon or Celestia, so I would suggest there being a dialogue tag or some kind of action being made by the character talking to tip-off who was speaking.
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Thank you for the input!
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No problem and hope it can help!
Fun fact: I had a very silly idea for my own story that had my human OC and Celestia stuck together in a tree or somewhere else and just end up talking about life. When I had this story's short description I thought "Hey someone else thought of a similar idea and pulled it off, but with ear scratches." That last part alone made this version better than my hypothetical version
Been stuck on a roller coaster that broke down once. Not a great experience though thankfully I was with a group I knew at the time so we weren't too bored.
Loved the story!
Small nitpick:
The second sentence here probably has a typo that makes it confusing who it is referring to.
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Whoops! It's been fixed!
Oh, so that's how Celestia got pregnant!
Four
Not a bad date, if you ask me.
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I know it's supposed to be somewhat SFW, but I seriously see Celestia actually orgasming in the story.
Good story right there man, dating Celestia is the dream, maybe I make one myself too.
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Regardless of whether or not she did, I could easily see her getting loud enough for the maintenance staff to jump to their own conclusions. And then picture the looks on their faces when they eventually see who that “noisy” couple stuck up there were...
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Pfft! Like this: