Rainbow Dash finally gets a letter returned to her by the prestigious Wonderbolts Academy; also known as one of the most picky Ivy League Sporting schools in the country, not to mention the range of University classes one must get in to if they wish to even become a proper Wonderbolt Athlete.
As Rainbow Dash braves her way though her classes, trying her best to live up to the expectations of the academy, her skill catches the eye of one of the most well known future Wonderbolts in the whole academy; Spitfire. Would their aspirations and love for sport bring them closer together?
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This is an interesting premise, I'm curious to see where you go with it.
Also, welcome to FiMFiction!
As a side note, I would suggest breaking up some of your dialogue into separate paragraphs. For instance, in this section it may be a bit daunting for readers to differentiate who is saying what.
Looking forward to reading more of your work!
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I do but I think the site just kinda broke it lol. I write chapters in my google docs before posting them anywhere and I read them through via my phone so I'm planning on that every few chapters
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I figured as much, but I thought I'd call attention to it regardless so that you were aware of it. Uploading stuff can be tricky sometimes!