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SonicBlitz18


A rocking brony with a love for crossover and adventure. Currently part time in college

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Good story ~ and where can i find a full pic on this story ?

The way the outfit is, I can't show it on here.

Please tell me there's going to be a sequel(s).

Deathworld?

Should feel right at home in the Everfree then.

Especially with Ponyville having supplies, services and a Spa.

Intresting, I dont believe Ive seen anyone else use Arthur C Clarkes 3001 criminal processing method before. Really hope Spike doesnt get stuck with the bigots of the Historical Anachronism Society.:duck:

“Lola mentioned something about, ‘servitorization’, so I’m not going into that, but given what that creep has done before he came here, I think he had it coming,” Spike said.

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You will not dear reader that in many occasions we will describe in extreme detail (with illustrations from our dear talented artist and co-author: Xhen J'Yutai). We understand that some descriptions may bring great disconfort to many readers, and as such we've separated and clearly maked them in case you wish to avoid those parts. Though we say that we also strongly reccomend those of stronger [digestive system analogue] to read the material throughly, as such contains insights on cultural and social cues that may be essential to your stay in many particular planets and social hubs within the federation
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So Spike is now the first Equestria's intergalactic ambassador? I don't mind a sequel or two of his space adventure, since I know it would be naughty.

Hey SonicBlitz18, I was wondering if and when you plan on continuing your "A Spiked Beach Honeymoon" story? If this is a question that you get asked a lot, I'm sorry for asking it. Stay safe and keep up the great work.

I WANT MORE! :twilightsmile:

al parecer no logro enganar a la experta XD XD... estan en la luna o volando alrededor de ella??... estando atrapado en la nave por un tiempo, ellos si lo saben aprovechar XD XD... me pregunto que tipo de tortura le dio celestia al cambiaforma??... a Judy conozco, pero no a Bonnette y a Nicole... me pregunto como seria esa interaccion de Spike con los familia de Lola y los embajadores y cientificos??... una ultima cosa, me permitiria traducir y compatir tu fic (y posiblemente otros) te prometo mencionarte.
apparently I can't fool the expert XD XD... are they on the moon or flying around it??... being trapped in the ship for a while, they know how to take advantage of it XD XD... I wonder what kind of torture Celestia gave the shapeshifter??... I know Judy, but not Bonnette and Nicole... I wonder what Spike's interaction with Lola's family and the ambassadors and scientists would be like??... one last thing thing, it would allow me to translate and share your fic (and possibly others) I promise to mention you

Great chapter

need antoer stoye to thise

This is your official review for the Furry Foray Festival Contest!

I've tried to be as objective as possible, but of course there are limits. I've tried to avoid being biased or arbitrary as much as I can, and hopefully I've succeeded at least somewhat. The full, final results will be announced on May 4th, and winners will be contacted shortly afterward to ask how they would like to accept their prizes. When readings these comments, please keep in mind that I know I'm often overly critical -- to the point where I can always find nitpicks even with the greatest works of literature. So don't take anything personally!

Notes:
- An interesting sort of setup -- something I definitely haven't seen in other contest entries.
- “Well, if you think that was hot, wait until you get to see my personality,” he said I like to think that "personality" is a euphemism here.
- The cut away to the Student Six kicking the shapeshifter's ass was pretty good.
- Spike seems to be taking all of this maybe a bit too casually and comfortably. Feels like he should probably be freaking out a bit more ... or at least have a bit stronger of a reaction to things.
- “Oh, sorry about that, I should have warned you,” Spike said. Yeah, lol. Not only warned, but maybe don't shove her down on you and cum down her throat when you've just met and you have no way to know if she'd be okay with that...
- Celestia's relationship with Spike in this fic is ... odd.
- And Celestia torturing a prisoner? No thanks. I'm not buying it.
- Spike especially as he was now a father, and he only saw her three months ago. Well -- and this is a crazy thought, but hear me out -- maybe you should use some kind of protection when you're casually fucking a stranger you just met?
- It does kind of seem like it's a sci-fi fic first and a clopfic second.
- Overall, not bad at all, though the sex scene was relatively short and by-the-numbers. I wasn't expecting this one to be so well put together.

Scores:
Provocativeness: 85
Progression: 70
Payoff: 80
Pacing: 65
Personality: 30
Prose: 81
Total: 411
For more information on what these scores mean, see the scoring rubric.

Sequel... now pls.

Spike had slept with plenty of ponies, even a few Griffons and Changelings, though only a handful of dragons.

What other sapients of Equestria did Spike bang with?

I feel this needs another chapter or a sequel one shot because that sounds like a fun time. After he leaves the planet we need to see it or read it

i want to see more of this story not just porn but the compleat see family/travel space entirety

I enjoyed reading this, enjoy re-reading this, will enjoy re-re-reading this
Any chance of a sequel?

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