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It had been an idle question on Spike's part, barely an idea at all.

"How did the mirror pool work, anyway?"

Twilight had found it unacceptable that she didn't have an answer so she rolled the boulder from the cave, and got to sciencing. She found that the pool cloned whatever was placed in it in exchange for a bit of organic material, then gave it a jolt of extra energy. A strong enough jolt to raise the dead, and the cloning process wasn't picky about what it started with.

It's been a few months now, the hubbub and hullabaloo has died down, and the ponies of Ponyville use her technology extensively, particularly the cutie mark crusaders.

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But can any story really live up to that idea you've laid out in your story descriptions?
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Interesting, but needs copyediting.

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I wasn't satisfied with it, but I've started and abandoned enough stories that I was desperate to finish something.

That was a interesting story and idea.

“Dammit, not again.”

well, certainly not what one expects as a reaction!

The only thing she knew with certainty was different was the towering mirror portal on the wall. That one meant something to her, so she had noticed when it changed.

interesting. a portal to the EqG world? would explain the computer equipment

“Before you try anything, you didn’t get it for sneaking out, so don’t try it.”

heh, that is a good line

Every single titration was done perfectly.

really makes you think why Apple Bloom didn’t get a cutie mark related to potions like she clearly was supposed to

After leading the rabbits back to Fluttershy’s cottage, where they received a withering lecture about how mistakes when someone is trying a new language should be forgiven that shamed them into leaving Sweetie Belle alone, the two sides swapped storied about their day so far.

aww, fun to think of the rabbits as speaking a distinct language that Fluttershy learned instead of it just being a vague magic thing

“No, that’s the hard part. Applejack says I knocked down Isaac Appleton when I died so she’s punishing me by not telling me.”

that does sound like it would lead to Apple Bloom knocking down Isaac Appleton again

“Strange times when ponies speak of dying so casually, but better to have you here than under a tree. You’d best come in so we can begin.”

good Zecora rhyming!

She locked it, a rarity for her.

yay Rarity’s in this!

The rest of the day they both had the faint taste of coffee on their breath. At least, Applejack did, and had assumed Apple Bloom did.

aww, what a lovely slice of life experience for Applejack to treasure

All the fears that had filled everyone’s mind in the early days of the renaissance device, when they had been afraid it would lead to a plague of mad ponies like the mirror pool it had been based on, or argued that the new ponies didn’t count as being the same, sprung to her mind.

ah yeah the mirror pool! i figured that would be part of this technology somehow!

“I’m sorry.” Said Applejack. “I didn’t know you long, but you mattered.”

and oof. powerful line!


a lot of really great ideas and beautiful moments here. thank you for writing!

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