Sunset Shimmer is forced to reconsider her future as a citizen of Earth rather than as a student of magic in Canterlot, and part of giving up her life in Equestria means giving up her original form forever, triggering a bout of intense homesickness in the ex-unicorn.
After an encounter with an unknown magical source, Sunset's greatest wish is granted. She is once again a unicorn, back in her original body.
Just one problem.
Actually, several.
She's lost, she can't be seen by anyone but her friends, and she stands at a solid three feet tall.
Oh yeah. And her magic isn't working.
Chapters (3)
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another Pony Sunset in human world fic, there is not enough of these and sadly the ones that there are never really finish.
Looking forward to see what you do. A good set up here for a character arc of Sunny to reconciled her two "halves" so to speak.
As what I would like to see mainly it's just her interacting with friends as pony, but I imagine we're going to get that anyway.
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Mildly interested in where this goes
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thank you! im having a lot of fun writing this so I'm glad you're enjoying it!! i plan to have a whole bunch of pony/human cuteness in the second act
This has been great so far, hope this will become a great story!
i really like the introspection on sunset's part so far!!
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thank you!! i find sunsets whole situation very intriguing as a character study so I'm glad I'm doing it justice so far :D
This story seems cool, can't wait to keep reading it!
Good work so far!
You're really good at depicting Sunny's struggle with her unique situation.
So much potential wasted.)
(Which is just another reason I wish they didn't cut Sunset's homesickness plot line from Friendship Games.
Also Welcome To The Site!!
🎊 🎇 Glad to hear you got such a warm reception.
Edit: You probably should rework your tags a little. I'm assuming that you tagged Twilight for Sci-Twi, who has her own tag and add Main 7 (EqG).
That was a good story so far goodluck with the rest of it.
I hope Trixie gets hell for what she did
That was a good chapter.
Ha that's about to be very literal.
Poor Sunny!
Sadly, I can so see Trixie doing something like this, even after she reformed, although then she probably feel bad about it afterwards.
oh, yes, it was both pleasant and sad, Trixie is a snake and a the scoundrel, what a nasty, selfish person she is, but otherwise everything is very pleasant
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