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Mockingbirb


A pony of mystery in the darkness. Or I forgot to take the lens cap off. (They/them is fine.)

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Love is complicated, even if you have several girlfriends to help you figure it all out.

(First "2023 Spring Fling!" :twilightsmile:
Seriously, it's probably an entry in this contest.)

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Oh, you. :ajsmug:

I was confused by the fact that they're human, but were talking about Saddle Arabians, Canterville, and More-mans (who have a human name, but an Equestrian gender-role reversal).

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I am honestly unclear about how to handle geography in a definitely CANON way while keeping things in the world of brightly colored Equestria Girls people.

Rainbow sighed. "Hundreds of people have a crush on me, I live in a poly household, and I STILL don't have a date for tonight." she sighed again. "This sucks."

🤣. Never change, Rainbow.

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I'm not sure if this is a bit too spoilery? But thanks!

The apartment's front door opened, and Twilight Sparkle walked in. She hugged and kissed Sunset Shimmer for about a minute. After that, she wrapped her arms around Fluttershy, nuzzling the pink-haired young woman.

yes good this is the group of friends i want :twilightsmile:

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Hey, Bad, I've just created a forum topic to ask for more general-purpose thoughts about how to write this sort of thing (stories involving Equestria Girls geography.) Maybe you can help out, idk?
:twilightsmile:

https://www.fimfiction.net/group/198620/equestria-girls-fics/thread/513721/geography-region-names-city-names-history-etc-of-the-equestria-girls-world-canon-fanon-headcanon

Edited to add: NOT to imply that this isn't a good place to reply too! I would be happy to see your reply posted both places, or anywhere, really.
:twilightsmile:

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Oh, "More-mans" is really funny, though. I wouldn't cut it.

The number of downthumbs on this story is perplexing. I wish down-thumbers would comment more often, because writers are often left wondering "Is my story bad in some way I can't see?" when the down-thumb is for something like "I don't like poly" or "I don't ship them".

I've also noticed that the number of down-thumbs on my stories is logarithmic in the number of views, while the number of thumbs-up is much more linear. That's really weird; it means the sooner someone sees a story after it's posted, the more-likely they are to downthumb it.

Delightfully silly stuff, and some fun EqG-ifications of familiar concepts. Thank you for it.

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The number of downthumbs on this story is perplexing. I wish down-thumbers would comment more often, because writers are often left wondering "Is my story bad in some way I can't see?" when the down-thumb is for something like "I don't like poly" or "I don't ship them".

Good way to sum up downvotes in a lot of cases.

Kudos on whipping out this little tale of meta-mockery/calling-out in what must have been maybe not even hours from the debut of the contest, and still managing to work in quite a bit of clever humor to boot. It does feel lacking in romance, despite technically being the largest romance of the entire contest, but it got the job done in instigating a near-instant rule amendment. And in a contest that mostly saw Flash in serious mode, I did enjoy having one fic treating him as put-upon goofball. Thank you for your submission.

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Kudos on whipping out this little tale of meta-mockery/calling-out in what must have been maybe not even hours from the debut of the contest, and still managing to work in quite a bit of clever humor to boot. It does feel lacking in romance, despite technically being the largest romance of the entire contest, but it got the job done in instigating a near-instant rule amendment. And in a contest that mostly saw Flash in serious mode, I did enjoy having one fic treating him as put-upon goofball. Thank you for your submission.

Thank you!

but it got the job done in instigating a near-instant rule amendment.

For any third parties reading this who have no idea what Eileen and I are talking about, I'd say the best way to get a minor wording change in contest rules is to start by ascertaining and respecting the SPIRIT of the rules.

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