Ah yes, Pinkie's existential senses. She watches you reading ya know. I appreciate that RD's personality as a character remains recognizable in an otherwise unusual situation. (Also I hope her constant denial becomes a running gag)

assuming I don't get hit by a bus."

Oh no, you jinxed it

Hey, this one finally got an update! I was worried it'd be yet another fun premise that never sees action.

I found some errornesses:

Rainbow finally gave up and rolled onto her back, holding the metal plate in position with her hoof while her singwing reached down and flipped the switch.

A quick flight to sSugarcube cCorner, she'd pick up some food to go, and a quick flight back.

Her dream of flying with the Wonderbolts was finally in reach, and she'd do almost anything to make that a reality. Even if it meant suffering the shame of being used by unknown stallions.

^ Not sure aboot this one—lemme know if your intention was different than my interpretation. Also, the second sentence is a "sentence fragment" and should be merged with the first.

It’d be like if I left home without my party cannon - I’m not really all there

In the darkness she focused on the pulsing need radiating from her pussy,

Rainbow might not have cum, but I did 3 times reading through this 🤤

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Thanks for the corrections, all fixed now.

I find the lack of non-euclidian porn on this website disappointing, so I'm hoping to explore this premise quite a bit (at least 6 more chapters are planned after the part 2 to this one, and honestly some of those will probably turn into multi-parters). Unfortunately, I have several projects on-the-go and I'm not the fastest clop writer out there, so it'll take some time.