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Rahheemme


A stray goat that sometimes writes about horses

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An unexpected pregnancy has forced Fizzlepop Berrytwist - formerly Tempest Shadow - to settle in Ponyville until the birth. With her due date drawing near, she finds herself in Sugar Cube Corner for a cravings snack and makes an unlikely friend with plenty of motherhood experience.

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Chapters (2)
Comments ( 20 )

Very nice story! But who is the father?

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that's who I;m wondering.

Maybe zepphyr??

I've been curious for a while now... What's with all the pregnancy fics? They're all well written. But it seems an odd niche to fill.

interesting ending guess she was sleeping around so didn't know which stallion had knocked her up,

This was a very nice story. I haven’t read any of your other stories yet but it looks like pregnancy stories are your niche. That being said, this one just needs to get a sequel. If not to know the father then to at least know the colt and how Fizzle handles her new life with that new addition!

This was adorable. So sweet and lovely. Have an upvote and a bookshelf add!

She's really beautiful ❤️

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This is a guess, but FiM is over 12 years old. I think most people outside of the target audience who watched the show were teens right? So they are going to be 20-30 years old now. Maybe a lot of fans are becoming mothers/fathers.

Never imagined what it would be like if Fizzlepop got pregnant. But I'm certain she'll make a good mother. :twilightsmile:

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It's a topic I enjoy writing and it's a little niche I've carved for myself on the internet

Who's the father!? 😀🔪 (I promised I only read the second chapter :twilightsmile:)

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I guess you'll need to ask Fizzle~

Hmm, Sea Brine, Blue Bolt and Arcturus are the three named as potential dads.....gonna go with an unnamed fourth fellow as the likely answer

Nice story, It was really sweet, t it was interesting to see Tempest pregnant, great job. Also, I've read through your other fics, and I've noticed that the characters always end up being pregnant with a boy. I have nothing against this, I'm just curious if you'll ever make it to where the individual who's pregnant will have a girl instead, you know, to add some variety and such?

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I honestly didn't even notice I'd done that.
I certainly will, now!

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So I just finished reading through Rhythm, and saw how it said Octavia is pregnant with a girl, however, I think my previous comment still has merit as I was revering to the title characters of your stories at the time.

This was such a beautiful story.

This is precious. :heart: An unlikely pairing to begin with, doubly so to see Mrs. Cake take the limelight full of acceptance and good advice. The unusual imbalance of the normally in-control Fizzlepop being the mentee of a small-time ponymom in her area of expertise was a delight, as was the gentle woldbuilding of Fizzy's post-move life. A true delight, calm and pleasant.

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