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Well hopefully they are nicer than a lot of nobles . If their noses got any higher they touch the moon.
Only complaint I have throughout the story are things like this that completely kill any sort of flow that you had going. Just really throws off the experience of a good story.
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I will have to agree with that.
Just randomly use “she/mare/pony/pegasus said/reply/answer/shouted”
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Okay, thanks for the feedback. I will work on it.
Not only she have multiple smiles, but they are wider than her muzzle at this point.
Huh. So they are going.... But then who is adopting.... What? Rather confused here, which is somewhat rare for us.
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It's like this Celestia will be the main foster parent. But Night Wind and Candy Warp will be like co-parents that will take care of Tec's daily life, so she can have a form of normal life.
Celestia adopted Tec, but Night and Candy are adopting her, too? Or will they be like surrogates?
Something that wasn't very clear to me is whether Tec recovered his severed leg.