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Thank you, I'm happy that you enjoying the story so far. But i should warm you before you proceed with the other chapters it's gonna get more darker later on, as dark as your original version of Dictators of Ponyville. Also looking back at it now I would have had Twilight strike applejack instead since she's the one who told the others to check on the imposter Cadence, but I figured that twilight in her angered state would take her anger and frustrations out on the first pony who even tried to apologize to her.

But again I'm happy that your enjoying it so far.

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Don't worry, i already have something planned for spike.

There stood Twilight Sparkle still skewered and hanging to the metal pipe, the mare twitched and turned as her breathing became slower and slower. Her would have been Nightmare form soon began to vanish as her body reverted back into its normal state as the red aura vanished completely from her body with the shattered remains of the alicorn amulet spilling onto the terrain. The unicorn struggled a bit as she managed to turn her attention to the many horrified citizens alongside the Canterlot group looking on with pure sadness written on each of their faces.

" G...Gi.......girls" She said in a meek tone and then turned towards her brother. " Ssss.......Shiny" With her last ounce of strength the unicorn looked up at the sun which shown bright as the rays illuminated her body. " Cel........................estia" Was the last thing the young mare said before a single tear ran down her face before going completely motionless as her retinas returned to their original color. Everyone looked on as tears formed on each of their faces at the realization that twilight Sparkle, The element of magic, a lifelong friend, was gone, but non took it more than the remaining element bearers, cadence, and Especially Shining Armor who let out a blood curdling scream after realizing what he has just done.

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Another example of “They won…but at what cost?”

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Nope, I don't think it would be a good idea.

I think there is quite enough "revenge" to last for a lifetime. Plus, Shining save the CMC. He can't just let his former sister freaking be a child killer. Spike could somewhat understand that at least.

And considering how Twilight end up because of blind revenge. ( Even though it was a bit justified. But becoming a terrorist in the end doesn't excuse it, and almost killed three f******* children. The f** is wrong with you!? Twilight!

And now, she had lost her own life because of her own sins! )

I highly doubt Spike will make things worse if he does something.

P.S. Where the hell is Celestia and Luna!?

If they were here, they could have easily saved the CMC already, and Twilight didn't have to freaking die?

It's also their fault for their cowardice.

I guess this means LUNA will have to take care of SPIKE from now on. I wouldn't put it pass him if he decides to CUT TIES with the element bearers, S.A., & Celestia as a result since it's mainly THEIR fault.

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Do you think SPIKE will decide to go back to the DRAGONS when all this is over?

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Wait, I remember you?

Did you change your username?

And I don't know or have a real answer about Spike's decision?

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Or maybe Celestia will be the one to adopt Spike and be his mother.

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To me, never mind Spike, how are Night Light and Velvet gonna react when they learn their daughter is dead and that she was killed by their own son (even though once again, it was in self-defense)?

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Indeed. After I re-read this part from Chapter 2:

“ Alright Candence” Velvet said. “ We’ll trust that they will make amends with our daughter and make up for their cruel actions towards her” She then proceeded to walk out of the room, Crescent was about to follow suit but not before turning towards his son one last time.

“ If something happens to twilight I will never forgive you” He said coldly and then left the room alongside his wife leaving the others and especially Shining Armor in a much sadder state.

Oh boy.😨😨😨😨😨
As a certain John Dimaggio robot would say: "Well, he's boned."

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You'll see his fate soon enough in the epilogue.

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Nope, this has been my username since the day I joined the site & no worries if not certain on Spike's decision.

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After the fact SHE'S HALF the reason T.W.'S dead? I doubt that. Maybe he'll either move back in with her parents or go back to the dragons.

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You mean saving three kids.

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Oh, my mistake.

Thought you were someone else. Because he also a diehard fan of either Spike, Nightmare Moon/Luna, or Chrysalis respectfully.

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Fair enough.

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Me SPIKE, LUNA(N.M.M.)? YES
CHRYSAILS: NOT SO MUCH

What happened to Trixie? Because she doesn't appear in this part.

Wow, this was dark. I have nothing against dark fics, in fact, I have read darker than this but wow. This is good but very sad. Well done!

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in the previous chapter, She's currently hogtied to a tree like a pinata after the battle between her and the group from the everfree and a guard is watching over her so that she doesn't escape while the others head into town.

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this is a awesome story ... keep up the good work

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I WANT MORE ... Great work so far ... im hooked ... added to follow list