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mauve


chocolate chip cookie > any other cookie

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Twilight was dying. OK, not really -- but she was getting to her breaking point. The chaotic schedule of her day had given her no time to talk with friends, nor get a bite to eat. Fortunately, at that very moment, The Sugarcube Corner laid in front of her eyes -- but unfortunately, it was closed. Out of desperation, she sneaks into the establishment and steals a cookie from Pinkie's Cookie Jar.

Will she get caught by Pinkie Pie? Will it break their friendship? Find out by reading this short story!


This story was written for the Quills and Sofa's Fic Exchange Event. The prompt for this story was from Buttery Biscuit. Feedback is very much appreciated -- good and bad.

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Comments ( 7 )

:facehoof::pinkiecrazy: Says it all I think. Upvoted and faved because this is the best kind of stupid.

So fuckin funny:rainbowlaugh:

Also ty for the drafts, they were also worth a laugh, no offense

This feels like it could’ve been a episode! Well done!

What was left on the imprint of the flank were a familiar set of sparkles – the cutie mark of Twilight Sparkle.

so.. her cutie mark is carved into her flesh

It was dumb but I loved every second of this.

:pinkiehappy:

Nice and funny fic! I personally think it would be a good addition if you dragged out Twilight being hungry/overworked, as we immediately jump to the cookie stealing stuff and we didn't get to feel her desperation.

But other than that, well done! :twilightsmile:

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Hahaha. I didn't even think of that.

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Thank you for the suggestion! I agree -- just that I didn't think about if adding more would work or not :P

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