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GalleyPass
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GalleyPass
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A great first offering, honestly. You've definitely got a good thing going with your writing style I'd say. If you enjoy doing it by all means I encourage you to keep writing ^^.
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Thanks very much! I really appreciate it.
I'm going to say this if you're going to lose. This will be the best way to lose a blow job on your way out.
An interesting first offering for the time it was posted. I'm glad I finally got the chance to read this. Great work.
Kind of disappointed, honestly. That there wasn't even an attempt to call out the super suspicious collapse because ponies are fickle and politics is vicious... fine, I'll play along. But then to drug her on stage, because the quasi-blackmail wasn't enough for it to be rape I guess, and break her down so completely into just a sex slave? And no one questions that, either? Porn will be porn I guess.
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The ending was kind of a last minute addition on my part for the sake of closing things off neatly and a final gag (pun mostly not intended), but yeah, the whole premise runs off total porn logic. Fair play if that's not your thing or if it stepped too far for your liking, I appreciate you giving it a go