Cantorlot Magic Academy
A school for all who wish to learn how to use magic and create magic items and/or potions for adventures and everyday bussiness that may come from there time within the walls of the school itself.
Starting his first day, Spike learns that he'll not only is he bunking with three sexy female students, but he'll also be leading them as the team captain!
(All characters in story are of legal age.)
~Pairings~
Spike x Dazzlings and Main 7
~Fetish's~
(It's a school of magic, who wouldn't use it like this?)
-Ass and Breast Worship
-Transformations
-Ass and Breast Expansions
-Magical Sexual Contests
-Harem
Chapters (2)
It's hard to say if this will be sexy or not in later chapters... I hope you deliver.
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I'm hoping to do best I can.
If you have any advice for later chapters, I'm all ears.
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The best advice is to think of imagination.
what kind of transformation is in this story?
Well, this is off to a good start. Good Grammer, no misspells, good descriptions. I will bookmark it and see how the rest of the story plays out.
Wow good start, i cant wait for the next chapter, its interesting, normally in stories when Spike is related to Celestia and Luna, usually Celestia is his mom and Luna his aunt, but now both are his aunts, wonder who is his mom, Twilight Velvet???
Ok, a couple of things here... first of all, paper. Not parper. And second... are you rewriting this from Second Person and into a different viewpoint? If so, you might have missed something here. Especially since everything else has been in Third Person perspective so far, at least to my knowledge.
Whatever the case, I suggest giving the chapter a bit of TLC. It feels a little bit rough around the edges. But it's nothing that a little bit of polishing can't fix.
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Thx for the heads up, and the portion you mention has been revised.
Thank you!
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No problem.
A few misspellings their not there, principal not principle, hone not home, interlocking not interlocking, not inyerlocking, heeled not heelyed, talents not tallent. You should have a spell and grammar check on this site to help you. Despite the misspellings story is good.
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Ok, will work on misspelling when possible.
Thank you for pointing this out, and thank you for your kind words.
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No problem when writing a story we tend to miss the small things because we're excited. Keep up the good work.
Prank?
I'm definitely keeping an eye on the work, its is fascinating to see this scenario where Spike is in with the Dazzling sisters in the same dorm, and that they know--accidentally,mind you-- that Spike is at least related to the Royal Sisters (we know Luna is his aunt, I'm assumimg Celestia is Mom, which makes Spike an unofficial Prince of Equestia). I wonder id there are some slight reference to Spike fame in the Crystal Empire--maybe there could be a few Crystal Ponies that see Spike as a student. I wonder how Adagio and the other sisters react to that...
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I do plan on adding a few crystal ponies into the mix later on in the story.
But for Celestia and Luna, your gonna have to read the next chapter when it's released.
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😉Wait and see! I might just surprise ya.😉