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Ryebuck Coppercap


A 22 year old bean obsessed with Ponies, Trains, and Linguistics. Currently studying Game-Design. Any pronouns are fine by me ^c^

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Cover art by Sinrar, go give them some love!


A thousand years ago, Celestia had to battle against Nightmare Moon: a possessed form of her sister Luna. The princess wept the years away and tried to bring Luna back, but nothing ever worked, so instead she made sure that history did not forget her younger sister.

Her faithful student Twilight Sparkle is convinced she will come back as she's sent to Ponyville to supervise the preparations for the thousandth Summer Sun Celebration since Luna's banishment. She'll make sure that her impending return goes off without a hitch.


This is my own take on MLP:FiM's pilot episodes, Friendship Is Magic Part 1 & 2, and the start of my own Alternate Universe where I rewrite some plotlines for the fun of it and to have more chronological consistency between episodes and shamelessly shove my OC down your throats (Not here yet, though).


Content Warnings:
- Minor mentions of blood and injuries (marked with the gore tag just to be safe)
- Light Violence (not far beyond what the show itself would dare to show)
- Family drama (2 bits if you can guess between whom)
- An Overabundance of Thee-s and Thou-s in the prologue
- Sad Alicorns

Rated ‹T› just to be safe, but probably more along the lines of ‹E+10›


Any comments are appreciated, as well as constructive criticism, be it about grammar, orthography, awkwardly written phrases, pacing, or any other things!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 7 )

Its a good first chapter goodluck with the rest of the story.

Haven't read it yet, but is Spike gonna be treated better than in the show?
Since the show had a nasty habit of shafting him since he's not allowed to be in the Mane 6's bond because of not being an Element Bearer

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I'm planning on it! For this AU I plan to have Twilight and Spike have a big sister, younger brother relationship more like the last seasons of FiM where they stopped treating Spike as the butt-monkey of the group.

That doesn't mean bad things can't happen to Spike, but instead of, "haha, funny lizard man squished by door opening, injury is funny," he'll be treated with respect :raritywink:

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He won't get excluded from the "chosen ones" Mane 6 then?

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I honestly don't know yet, as I'm making the AU up as I go. What I do know is that he will have an important B plot in this story while the girls are in the everfree forest instead of just disappearing until Luna's party, and in the future I plan to have him often join the Crusader's shenanigans :moustache:

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