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In a world of brass and electricity, a disgraced Sunset Shimmer attempts to prove herself to her erstwhile mentor; bringing life into the world through means unnatural! But things don't quite work out as she planned...
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Features ponified versions of EQG characters. Marked as Teen for saucy interactions, but is largely SFW.
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A really neat, if impromptu story.
The Dazzlings revived as robots built by Sunset? That's a nice original idea. Also loves the affection Sunset is receiving from all three sisters, which fulfill my obsession of an ot4 story.
I'm loving it already. Keep up the good work, author
This was a fun story; also saucier than I expected even given the warning, lol. I'm curious to see where this story goes and what's the story behind the sirenbots already having fully formed personalities.
I wonder how long she'll be there
Oh that's several degrees of not good.
The car has risen from the dead
Adagio might be..
(Wait for it...
:
Over her head!
who is that pervert unicorn?
This chapter went way more intense in the end than I expected given the lighthearted first chapter. Lots of intriguing stuff here, including a certain other unicorn having some idea of what's going on.
I think you meant to write Adagio there?
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Yup. I went over this like three times but still missed typos lmao
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That was probably not the only one, meaning i have missed some too.
But the story itself is well written and seeing how i did not catch more
(if you look around a bit, you will find me being pretty pedantic about
stuff in other stories) that means there are not that many errors to
begin with either.
Adagio doesn't know her own strength.
does the siren still have their emo music brainwashing power?
You've been mentioned
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Automaton
Golem=clay
Automaton=steel, rubber ect.
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There's a lot of golems in pop culture not made from clay.
Plus this is a story I'm writing. I get to say what is and isn't a golem in my own story.
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You'll simply have to wait and find out ;)
sunset feel like japanese harem protagonist like now. accept she actually got laid.
Covering chapters 3-4
Glad to see that Adagio was saved from the river, but I didn't expect her to be in such a bad state after. Good thing she's a robot. It was interesting seeing how Sonata and Aria both reacted to her condition.
I'm surprised to see Rarity show up too, along with her father. Seems like this story will be going on for a while, so I'm amazed it's a commission.
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How is the Siren's music emo?
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Not good
There's something amusing about them getting into such debilitating accidents.
Sonata, why?.. At least she managed to put herself back together, which is admittedly pretty impressive.
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Wait until you see what happens to Aria~
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K-pop is more effective at brainwashing
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you have to listen to rock to keep your mind clear
Woof, that's pretty rough on Sonata. And I thought Adagio went through hell. At least she kept a positive attitude.
It's interesting how the Castle of the Two Sisters is still a thing in this AU. I wonder what that means for the rest of the setting.
Good chapter! And one where no one is grievously damaged lol. It was nice to see everyone come to Sonata's aid. It'll be interesting to see what the ending leads to.
Twilight is a weirdness magnet, it seems
Well, aren't Twilight a spoiled brat used to get anything she wants on a whim and not taking 'no' as an answer?
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seems to be yes
Yep, another wonderful, in character, example of Twilight Psycho.
I hope this universes version of Celestia finally throws her in prison.
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seems like shes used to getting her way with the gaurds as well ug
Everything about this is just so damn interesting
Nightmare Moon is a golemmancer?
This Twilight is a massive asshole and I hope she gets called on it and that it fucking breaks her self image.
What a dick.
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I live for this reaction
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Should have made it dusk shine for that extra creep out dirtbag factor :P
Another good set of chapters! Interesting to see how Twilight acts in this AU. I somehow didn't expect Twilight to be notably younger than Sunset, or for the entire "student of Celestia" thing to come into play. The bit about Celestia having made a golem of her sister reminds me of Egophiliac's old MLP Steampunk AU comics.
Damn, Celestia had multiple students at once and neither of them knew the others existed until now.
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No, there's only so much you push a character until it becomes painful to read.
Spike 2.0 ftw?
Chrysalis 0.8 beta
Get wrecked Twilight.
Oh...OH! She is here....my queen.
Eh, who on the roof, Aria or Adagio? It constantly switches between them.
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Meant to be just Adagio. I have a problem of getting their names mixed constantly and try as I might to correct it I still miss mistakes!
I've gone and corrected it.
Another great chapter! Still wild that this is being commissioned piece by piece.
Didn't parse that the robot at the end was Chrysalis until reading the comments.
i would like to correct a few things
but i did not find anything wrong.
also:
i was right, Chrysalis! :P ^^