Fruit Punch, formally known as Mob, has ended up in Equestria somehow. No rhyme or reason to it. Oh by the way, he landed in the Great Galloping Galla, the first one since Princess Luna’s return... his presence may have fucked with the timeline a bit.
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boo. u suck.
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Uh... what?
Well obviously, Sun here is not a star, its a shining piece of shit, but not a star.
Funny and enjoy able
Funni story, I liky
Nice ass story
Drunken fist
Funny asf keep up the good work lad
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What is wrong with you?
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a lot
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Judgement heat action real!?!?!?!?
well, i like this
correct!
Bro that's a nicely written chryssy you got there
Wow, no wonder this guy needed classes to learn how to comedy. Couldn't have had a better straight line set up for him--he went to court and they threw the book at him. And nothing!
I'm enjoying this story so far
pretty sure this is supposed to be Badlands right?
for a few a year?
i think you mean a year
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Ah shoot, missed those typos. Welp, thanks for helping me out! I usually writes these on an iPod and then edit them on a very slightly bigger iPhone 8, so typos are bound to slip through with my very bad proof reading skills.
Hope the story’s enjoyable despite those being there.
Oh, he picked the wrong name for a life without violence...Fruit PUNCH.
GooOoOOd!🙂
This is so good I can't help but keep laughing on every single chapter I read.
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I’m glad you enjoy my little thing here! I’m glad my story can accomplish at least one thing, which is the thing I made it for; making somebody have a giggle, laugh, or exhale out of your nose over it. Hopefully what I have planned continues to make you laugh.
If I had a nickel for every story to reference Ol Bean, I’d have two nickels.
Which isn’t a lot, but it’s weird it happened twice.
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gotta reference the beans. No Nose Knows slaps though.
First!
Anything can be a weapon even a bric- Full body slam
lmao
Are you sure he's not the son of discord he's so random it's not even funny
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he could be, or he could be a mentally ill college student. you never know
RIP, his stage crook and laffy taffy.
Who do you think she learned it from?
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Probably her mother
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I figured there would've been instant consequences for singing about fucking diamond tiara's mom
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Oh i have an idea for how that’ll bite Fruit in the ass.
Still kinda waiting on the ”and he might not be taking this as seriously as he should be” part to happen Cause so far he seem pretty serious to me
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what a little satellite
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Oookaaay Dr. Doofenshmirtz...
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brick weapon for the proletariat
Story's great, but there is still proofreading that needs to be done. A bunch of typos are still scattered throughout the chapters. Other than that, this was hilarious and I'm looking forward to more of it.
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The typos result from my terrible proof reading and simple sleep deprivation lol. I usually try to go back and reread everything after i post a new chapter and squash any typos i find. I might not do a great job at finding typos, but i try.
I mean it is Pinkie, the laws of reality are her’s to command.
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If you want a little extra help, my last job on here seems to have dropped from the face of the earth.
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He missed the "or else" fine print... Something he will notice if the clock turns 8:01 and he isn't at sugarcube corner.
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Well the worse possible consequence would obviously be having to really fuck diamond tiara's mom
How did Chrysalis remove the necklace with such an enchantment that only allows the wearer to remove it?
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Voodoo magic
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Understandable