The Mystery of the Iron Bird Festival

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Edgeblackstar

Edgeblackstar #1 · Jul 19th, 2023 · 1 · · Order of the Iron Bird ·

Here is a comment for this story .” for all who reading this have a great day”

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Edgeblackstar #2 · Jul 21st, 2023 · · · In the bathhouse ·

I wanted to ask you, readers, here: is the text read normally from machine translation and is everything OK? Can you be clearer with the first part. Everything seem to bee looking fine.

coopda

coopda #3 · Oct 19th, 2023 · · · Sabotage and division ·

The path turned out to be familiar, leading to the underground rooms of the house. There they were met by the already familiar unicorn Lyra. Bowing, she took out a bunch of keys and handed them to the white mare. No one else met Kramarenko on the way. When they reached the cherished doors and fiddled with the locks, the ponies opened them with their magic. In the great hall, in the illumination of many magical lights, lay the skeleton of a downed Mig and on a stand the dropped parachute and winter clothes of the pilot.

wasn't it stated that the mig was captured and buried by twilight's group?

Solntsepek

Solntsepek #4 · Oct 20th, 2023 · · · Sabotage and division ·

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It said at the beginning that unknown people stole the remains of a downed MiG from under Twilight's nose

coopda

coopda #5 · Oct 20th, 2023 · · · The final ·

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okay, i must be misremembering

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