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This story is a sequel to Life after Death


Starlight and Maud get engaged but didn’t visit the choosing stone first. It was against Pie tradition and Ma isn’t going to forget that. The couple has to got to the farm and make amends. Will it lead to a happy married life or the end of their relationship? Maud isn’t sure. It’s a rock based decision.

Thanks to Lysander and Stinuim Ruide for helping to edit this one. It’s taken a long time to release from editing limbo on my part.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 6 )

“I did it!” Starlight shouted while she jumped in the air. The field felt like it was moving as the bright light source soared and landed in glee.

ok, well, this...

“I surprised you! I saw your surprised face! Your voice even changed! Oh my gosh, now you’re blushing!” She lifted her hooves to her mouth but the huge smile was impossible to hide.

... genuinely made me kick my feet up in the air and giggle. So adorable!

She looked out the window towards the little grove where both our husbands were buried. The movement was ingrained in her muscles in her neck.

chills. I loved this chapter so much and this drama is so good.

“I see. I thank thee. ‘Tis necessary to experience such warmth from one’s kin from time to time. ‘Tis possible I hath misjudged this union.” She pulled back to look at me through her thick glasses, a small smile on her face.

My feelings! Many heartfelt moments in this one. What a very good read, Short. I love this five-ever.

Thank you, Author, for a very well-written story. I enjoyed reading it. Maud is a favorite pony to me.

Greetings! I'm late on the draw by a wide margin, I know, but for the future reference of yourself and others - have a review!

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