• Published 9th Nov 2022
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Nightmare Night - Admiral Biscuit



Human holidays are new to Cinder Glow, so I decided to celebrate Halloween with her.

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Halloween

Neither of us had gotten invited to parties, and inside I was actually relieved. We’d get to experience it as it was meant to be experienced; we’d have hordes of kids and various kinds of costumes arriving at our door and while some of them might not prefer the candy on offer, they’d all love Cinder Glow, I was sure of that. She was a kid magnet which was a constant danger when shopping but also relentlessly adorable.

I think deep inside she loved it, too.

Cinder’s signal to get dressed was when I put on my costume. I was ready to offer her help with hers if she needed it, but she didn’t. Of course in her modifications, she’d made it kirin-friendly.

Her stockings went on her back legs, the bat-wings and bat-ears adorned her back and her actual ears—the latter was overkill, in my opinion—and she’d even taped a drawing of a pumpkin on her flank and hung one of the leftover spiders from her horn. As theming went, it was all over the place, but it was very much in the spirit of the holiday, and she looked as adorable as ever.

The porch light was lit, and so was the pumpkin. Against all odds, it had survived, even after the last of its flesh and seeds had been eaten.

I’d expected that we’d wait inside and greet the children as they came and rang our doorbell, but Cinder wanted to be on the porch, so that was where we went. The firefighter costume hadn’t come with a turnout coat, which was a shame. It would have helped keep me warm.

By mutual agreement, I was on candy duty. I knew she had a plan, but I didn’t know what it was until the first trick-or-treaters came up our walk. Just as they stepped onto our porch, the pumpkin erupted in blue balefire, and Cinder let out a long, menacing laugh.

There were some shrieks of terror; one little kid went running back down the walk towards his mom, but the others took it in stride. The flames around the pumpkin subsided, and I handed candy to the remaining kids, then after a moment of thought gave them an extra treat for their friend.

As the night went on, we developed a routine. I’d fake putting out the fire, spraying it with an imaginary hose. If there were really small kids, Cinder would forgo her evil laugh. Plenty of kids and a few adults petted her mane or nose or scratched her ears and it was a good time until a cluster of drunken college students stumbled up our walk demanding candy.

The balefire pumpkin set them back a step, and then Cinder let out a guttural growl as flames started to flicker across her eyelids and rise from her mane—melting the plastic spider in the process. Baring her fangs at them wasn’t really needed, but she did anyway.

They were drunk but they weren’t stupid, and hastily departed for greener pastures. Cinder and the pumpkin flickered out, and she bumped my hip with her head. I rubbed my hand through her mane and then tied on a new spider while we waited for the next group of kids to arrive.

🎃🎃🎃

By nine, all the kids were gone and the streets were empty once again. We had half a bag of candy left, and I unwrapped a celebratory mini Mr. Goodbar and handed it to Cinder, wondering as I had every Halloween if there were any full-sized Mr. Goodbars anywhere. I’d certainly never seen one.

She ate the candy and also had a bite of the jack-o’-lantern after I indicated that it was no longer needed.

I had a nibble, too, and then the two of us went back inside. I turned off the porch light and she took off her fake wings and the two of us settled together on the couch with a bucket of candy and a pumpkin—minus one bite—on the table in front of us.

Apple cider to share from a plastic jug, and as I started absently scritching her ears, I started to think ahead to Thanksgiving, and how much better it would be with a kirin friend.

Comments ( 58 )

How many back up spiders did he have stashed?

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It's been a while since I needed a plastic spider, but as I recall the smaller ones tend to come in packs of lots of spiders, so there are surely a few backup spiders available for when Cinder Glow accidentally melts one.

Pretty good keep it up.

...and then Autumn let out a guttural growl as flames started to flicker...

I uh, think you got the wrong Kirin there :P

Really cute, nice work as always!

The balefire pumpkin set them back a step, and then Autumn let out a guttural growl as flames started to flicker across her eyelids and rise from her mane—melting the plastic spider in the process. Baring her fangs at them wasn’t really needed, but she did anyway.

Geeze, what does she have against college students?

Delightful stuff, especially the nirik-powered jack-o'-lantern. Thanks for the seasonal warm fuzzies.

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Considering they were a little over the limit (but ambulatory), she was making a statement that they did NOT want to start anything she would finish (and playing with fire usually gets one burned) ...

*cue applause* this was pretty dang good

Utter delightful, if a little short. I ♥️ kirins!

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I uh, think you got the wrong Kirin there :P

Oops, I did. Correction made, thank you!

Really cute, nice work as always!

Thanks! :heart:

Very cute, but ihere I always thought Kirin would like Reese’s PeanuT butter cups!

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Geeze, what does she have against college students?

That they're drunk and might cause problems? Maybe Cinder's book that she references* includes how some people smash pumpkins, and Cinder wants to keep it safe.

*(The book is, of course, So You Want To Go To Earth)

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Delightful stuff, especially the nirik-powered jack-o'-lantern.
Thank you! I figure that a balefire-enhanced jack-o'-lantern would be a fine addition to any Halloween decor. so long as the fire could be controlled.

Thanks for the seasonal warm fuzzies.

You're welcome! A little late for Halloween, but a good read for election night IMHO.

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Considering they were a little over the limit (but ambulatory), she was making a statement that they did NOT want to start anything she would finish (and playing with fire usually gets one burned) ...

One of the 'anythings' they might have been considering was kicking jack-o'-lanterns, and Cinder wasn't gonna let that happen.

I suppose that being on fire (or starting to be on fire) is a good warning for people. One of my other stories, some poor bastard who was getting aggressive towards an earth pony misunderstood what it meant when she turned her rump to him.

He learned, though.

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Kirins are the best, cute and floofy and only occasionally on fire.

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Very cute, but here I always thought Kirin would like Reese’s Peanut butter cups!

Maybe they would. From what I've seen online, peanut butter is very hit or miss with IRL equines--some of them love it and some of them have no interest at all.

Chocolate may also be hit or miss.

(In canon, of course, ponies seem to be more interested in sweets than IRL equines are.)

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Most people probably wouldn't understand why that last point is actually a positive to me :pinkiehappy:

It is nice that Cinder enjoyed her 1st Halloween. It is very similar to NightMareNight the ponies use.

Zebras will figure out how to marry BailFire with the matrix of the MegaSpell (the Ministry of Kindness under Fluttershy originally developed the MegaSpellMatrix to be married to the healing spell for healing whole battlefields of wounded) and NecroMancy to create spells capable of destroying whole cities, and transforming the dead into FleshEating Ghouls. These will be the infamous Necromancing BailFireBombs, which turn cities of 5 million ponies into 3 million incinerated ponies, 1 million injured ponies, being pursued by 1 million hungry ghouls.

This is what the detonation of a BailFireBomb is like:

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As to chocolate....DON'T give it to dogs. The caffeine in it act like speed for them & an OD can kill them.

Race horses will fail their drug test if they get a candy bar before a race. They can OD on cocoa.

:twilightoops:

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Fire is not always right, but it is always hot and compelling.
—Michael Crichton

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Or else Twilight's School of Friendship will do its job and all the pony-adjacent quadrupeds and other Equestrian sapients will all learn to live together in harmony, as Faust intended. True, there will be some rough patches on the way, but they'll work through them and turn Equestrian into the Utopia it always wanted to be.

And then something obviously went wrong, 'cause G5.

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I knew all those things!

I have a mental image of a racehorse being arrested for using performance-enhancing drugs, protesting that she only ate a chocolate bar.


. . . that's got story potential, doesn't it?

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I'm hit or miss on that. A few of my stories have ponies not speaking English (which is the most likely case), or for that matter Equestrians from different nations/tribes not speaking the same language.

I think that the kirin are more uniquely placed to deal with that than a lot of other species; after all, they spent a significant amount of time being unable to speak and would have figured out how to 'talk' without words.

This one time at the shop, I had a discussion with a mute customer who was very good at pantomiming what he wanted done with his vehicle. He did have a notepad so he could write things down, but that was largely unneeded.

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Admiral Biscuit has a LOT of Pony On Earth stories. Quality varies. Some are excellent.

Check out "Shipt"
There weren't always ponies and then there were.

:trixieshiftleft:

A little late, but very cute.

Quite a cute slice of life. Cinder Glow in a bat costume is a real charmer. :twilightsmile:

This is adorably cute.

As always, your pony-or-other-being-on-Earth stories are simple and adorable.

I have to wonder, how did Cinder get to Earth, or manage to stay there, without speaking any of the language(s)? That seems highly problematic, particularly for a culture without any references to humans norms…

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Yeah, it was late, but hey, who says that we can't celebrate and remember Halloween a few days later?

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Thank you!

Cinder Glow in a bat costume is absolutely adorable, no question.

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As always, your pony-or-other-being-on-Earth stories are simple and adorable.

:heart:

I have to wonder, how did Cinder get to Earth, or manage to stay there, without speaking any of the language(s)? That seems highly problematic, particularly for a culture without any references to humans norms…

I honestly don't know. My thought is that she's on some kind of exchange program and either the language barrier wasn't seen as a significant problem, or else it got overlooked in all the other paperwork.

She's got her book to help her with some stuff, and a human who's willing to figure it out with her. Sometimes that's all you need.

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Like you said, never underestimate the power of gesturing and pointing. Though with ponies that might be tad more complicated due to being... well pony-shaped, but I'm sure they could eventually make it work.

This was a nice adorable story to get into the Halloween spirit.

A very nice story. I didn't expect the language barrier, but it still worked.

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Like you said, never underestimate the power of gesturing and pointing. Though with ponies that might be tad more complicated due to being... well pony-shaped, but I'm sure they could eventually make it work.

Not having hand motion like humans does give them a disadvantage; on the other hand, they've got expressive ears which we humans don't. Plus, there's also the possibility of using flash cards for activities--some of the clients I work for have used those.

Honestly, spending time together and learning effective ways to communicate is typically effective. Given their history of being mute (I don't recall if the episode ever said how long the kirin were silent), the kirin are probably well-suited to communicating other ways.

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Thanks!

The good news is that kirin are well-suited to dealing with it; Cinder is probably very good at pantomime.

So cute! Thanksgiving Kirin fic time! XD

I would be very happy to see more of these and see how their relationship develops over time.

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I might . . . I also love the dynamic of the pair.

This was utterly delightful and I am deficient for not reading it sooner.

Hmmm, a kirin deterrent for drunk college kids. I may just have to look into that one, it sounds helpful, and fluffy.

Nice story.

Very matter of fact and one sided though. Cinder almost didn’t feel like her own character.

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