so pinkie pie is pregnant with soarins foal, knowing pinkie she will probably go through with the pregnancy. i can only imagine what would happen if pinkie pie would ever meet soarin again
What do you mean, the intended double entende of the word "plot", or is it the fact that based on this chapter, the plot (storyline ) is thickening, both literally and figurately?? Remember that last line: "I-I think I may be pregnant..." If that is the case, Pinkie's not gonna be able to hide it... "
Dude, if I was Soarin, and I'm so glad I'm not, I would have started running and never stopped. But that's not going to save him. I mean Discord is now free and a good guy. And who out of all the ponies did Discord sync best with. Pinkie. Since Soarin hurt Pinkie I see a pissed off Spirit of Chaos coming after him with enough old fashioned gratuitius cartoon violence to make the Saw series look like a Disney frolic in the park with cute puppies and kittens.
I think she is less afraid of Dashie not liking or trusting her anymore and is more worried about devastating Dashie with the news. Dash will certainly stick with Pinkie but Pinkie feels like she can't hurt Dashie that way (even if Dash would certainly pick Pinkie over Soarin).
Well then. Ummmm. Wow. I'm not sure if this is a good story or bad. Yet. I think this will end with a 'like.' I almost never rate a story until it is done, but I feel fairly certain this will end with a like. But this could use some editing. If you'd like, I could read over each chapter and let you know what I see. Other than that, this is really... interesting. I find myself enjoying it. Keep it up.
2024433 I was thinking of Hades from the disney movie Hercules when I was envisioning what you was saying about seeing Discord being pissedoff...now imagine rapidash Twilight, an adult Spike like from "secret of my excess", and Fluttershy from "The Best Night Ever"--all ganged up on Soarin.
Yeah, Soarin' gonna be FUBAR by the time it's all said and done. Sadly, dungeons are not gonna be good enough for this piece of crap he calls a stallion, only a trip to the moon or the sun w/o any protection whatsoever.
Moon? Sun? Oh no no no. I was thinking death.....but the instant before he draws his last breath, BAM!, turned to stone. Trapped forever between life and death, still dying, but never truely getting there.
BRING HIM TO ME SO I MAY FEAST OFF F HIS FLESH AND USE HIS HOOVES TO APPLAUD HIS DEMISE. MAY I RIP OUT HIS HEART RIGHT IN FRONT OF HIM, AND TAKE A HUGE BITE, WHILE HE'S STILL ALIVE, SO HE'LL KNOW WHAT TRUE FEAR IS.
me:
Soarin', you bastard.
And the plot thickens! (Oh god I never feel comfortable using that word anymore...)
so pinkie pie is pregnant with soarins foal, knowing pinkie she will probably go through with the pregnancy. i can only imagine what would happen if pinkie pie would ever meet soarin again
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Soarin' Face-Bucked (Preferably by Applejack, considering how powerful her buck is) into next millennium.
2022038 that is if AJ realizes that soarin was the one who violated her friend
I think Pinkie's underestimating Dashie here. Element of Loyalty after all, right?
I think she'd be more loyal to her friend than to the psycho rapist she *thought* was one of her idols.
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What do you mean, the intended double entende of the word "plot", or is it the fact that based on this chapter, the plot (storyline ) is thickening, both literally and figurately?? Remember that last line: "I-I think I may be pregnant..." If that is the case, Pinkie's not gonna be able to hide it...
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Rainbow would kick his ass to the moon
Better watch out sorin WERECOMINGFORYOUUUUUUU.:flutterrage:
Dude, if I was Soarin, and I'm so glad I'm not, I would have started running and never stopped. But that's not going to save him. I mean Discord is now free and a good guy. And who out of all the ponies did Discord sync best with. Pinkie. Since Soarin hurt Pinkie I see a pissed off Spirit of Chaos coming after him with enough old fashioned gratuitius cartoon violence to make the Saw series look like a Disney frolic in the park with cute puppies and kittens.
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I think she is less afraid of Dashie not liking or trusting her anymore and is more worried about devastating Dashie with the news. Dash will certainly stick with Pinkie but Pinkie feels like she can't hurt Dashie that way (even if Dash would certainly pick Pinkie over Soarin).
And let the gelding of Soarin begin.
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*international sign of distress*
Good chapter.
2022428 your comment... made me think of one thing.
skip to 1:17
Holy shit...
Well then. Ummmm. Wow. I'm not sure if this is a good story or bad. Yet. I think this will end with a 'like.' I almost never rate a story until it is done, but I feel fairly certain this will end with a like. But this could use some editing. If you'd like, I could read over each chapter and let you know what I see.
Other than that, this is really... interesting. I find myself enjoying it.
Keep it up.
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I was thinking of Hades from the disney movie Hercules when I was envisioning what you was saying about seeing Discord being pissedoff...now imagine rapidash Twilight, an adult Spike like from "secret of my excess", and Fluttershy from "The Best Night Ever"--all ganged up on Soarin.
Yeah, Soarin' gonna be FUBAR by the time it's all said and done. Sadly, dungeons are not gonna be good enough for this piece of crap he calls a stallion, only a trip to the moon or the sun w/o any protection whatsoever.
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Moon? Sun? Oh no no no. I was thinking death.....but the instant before he draws his last breath, BAM!, turned to stone. Trapped forever between life and death, still dying, but never truely getting there.
I will do unspeakable things to Soarin, horrible painful things. Poor Pinkie Pie
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Lol i remember that vid
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He sees how wonderful she is. In his twisted mind, it makes sense.
Any updates expected within the foreseeable future? This story has been stagnant for a while.
I-I-
i like it!!
Pinkie may be my fav pony but i love a good story when i read one.
MORE!!
This story is still on my fave list, but there haven't been updates lately and *inhales deeply* 'AH WANT IT NOOWWW!!!!!
BRING HIM TO ME SO I MAY FEAST OFF F HIS FLESH AND USE HIS HOOVES TO APPLAUD HIS DEMISE. MAY I RIP OUT HIS HEART RIGHT IN FRONT OF HIM, AND TAKE A HUGE BITE, WHILE HE'S STILL ALIVE, SO HE'LL KNOW WHAT TRUE FEAR IS.
Or, I could hand you off to Fluttershy . . .
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You're too tame. Eight can do much worse. And so can I