1831767 -huggles- you've probably heard this, but im sorry for your loss, as for the chapter itself, I was kind of confused at first, but then it made sense, I am liking the fact you are taking into account the way he turned from Soarin' the Wonderbolt, to Soarin' the Rapist
Hmm. An interesting fic. Unfortunately your chapters were so short. I'd like to say that you portrayed Pinkie's trauma nice. ly or Soarin's thoughts nicely (which you did, by the way.) but there's so little of it.
Still, I think this was a superb fic, despite its age. Deserves the upvote.
What the Why so short? Don't get me wrong I favorited this day 1. Im happy you updated but this feels lackluster. is something stubing your idea flow?
1831616 I have a lot of things going on. School work and a missing family member.
WAT A
1831767 -huggles- you've probably heard this, but im sorry for your loss, as for the chapter itself, I was kind of confused at first, but then it made sense, I am liking the fact you are taking into account the way he turned from Soarin' the Wonderbolt, to Soarin' the Rapist
1831767 Well, my foot tastes very salty today.
Hmm. An interesting fic. Unfortunately your chapters were so short. I'd like to say that you portrayed Pinkie's trauma nice. ly or Soarin's thoughts nicely (which you did, by the way.) but there's so little of it.
Still, I think this was a superb fic, despite its age. Deserves the upvote.
*Wonderbolt
Death penalty